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AprilEve


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A story written as a series of 100 word drabbles. When Tirek took Twilight's magic, he also took something else this is that event, and the aftermath. AU ending to the season 4 finale. Rated T for carefully worded character death.

Just in case anyone is confused (and because I could only add 5 character tags) Other characters involved are Shining Armor, Twilight's Parents, and Spike.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

I think we need a sequel.

her magic was tied to her differently

I like this concept

4614083
I agree. Even though what happens next can be assumed, I would love to see it in writing.

4623637 It would be nice if her magic was actually trapped inside the box and when the next elements open the box it revives Twilight.

4614432

Same here. Only seen a few other stories flirt with the concept.

4640032 I feel that this whole Idea would be great for a longer more developed story. It would only need to be one chapter, but it would be good all the same.

This Requires a Sequel. The tale demands it. The story isn't finished.

Very nice.:moustache:

~Leonzilla

Okay so I like most people want a sequel because this is a wonderful set up for a brilliant concept. In my mind I can already see how it can play out; many years later the main 5 find the key in the chest and wonder how it got there. This leads them to discover their keys. They unlock the chest and... well how you go about it but this is logically the point were Twilight comes back to life. How you go about this and were you go from there is really up to preference.

Anyway that's sort of my idea on how to do it, but that's just me.

The ending makes it sounds like there is a continuation but there isn't, the concept is amazing for there to be a sequel, would be nice.

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