Twilight and Celestia couldn't be happier with their lives. That is until Chrysalis comes along to ruin that.
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This is a short story. The chapters are meant to be this short.
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yoiu say shes dead but me thinks she will be back considering the title of this story
Hmmm, you've peaked my interesting, my friend.
If Celestia have to become Daybreaker at leash your way is a good way.
9124205
I feel that the only way Celestia can become Daybreaker is if Twilight were to die right in front of her. Something has to hit her hard, really hard. I believe Twilight's death is one of those triggers.
9124364 I thought so as well
I look forward to seeing where this goes.
9124490
There are Daybreaker stories out there that don't even explain how she turned into Daybreaker. And then there are the ones that do explain how she became Daybreaker, but the reasons to why she changed are very minor.
9124506
I'm reading your Daybreaker story as well and I really love it.
9124511
Really glad you are enjoying it thus far. Very stoked about there being a Daybreaker tag now, makers finding stories about her so much easier ^-^ i look forward to your next update.
9124524
You won't believe how excited I am for your next update. Also the update to this story will happen sooner than you think. Wink wink nudge nudge.
Jesus.... Daybreaker just... Brutalized Chrysalis...
9124936
That's Daybreaker for you
9125052
I'm terrify of she's gonna do to everyone else....
9125092
The next chapter is the final chapter, and it's not what you think. There will be a sequal if people want it.
9125135
Sequel now!
9125192
Once the final chapter comes out I will start on the sequal. In the mean time while your waiting for the sequal you can read my other stories like 'Celestia's twisted love' or 'The 5 confessions.'
9125224
Ok I'll check them out later, promise.
9125229
I hope you enjoy the stories.
I fine with that and also add reactions of how changeling queen learn to twilight come back to life
Damn your cliffhangers! I demend a sequel now!
P.S. But take your time tho
Sequel please tho no twlight/daybreak (or luna) deaths please
9126478
Well since a lot of people want a sequal to this story I guess i'll start on it soon. I already have an idea of how the sequal will play out too.
9126676
Yay!
chryssie never learns
You need a lot of work.
this story easily could of been way longer
9133544
I might do some changes here and there in the future or add another chapter that shows how Daybreaker has been ruling Equestria ever since Twilight died. I don't know yet
1 Find supernova candidate ( U Scorpii ) sounds good.
2 Dump bug into core with spell of protection on her.
3 Sit back and wait. We have lots of time.
Uh Chrysalis you might wanna start running like now.
Not bad! It looks like it needs a little proofreading but otherwise this story is interesting.
You also wrote 'dinning' instead of 'dining'
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9288057
I had a feeling I spelled that wrong.
*Reading*
*Twilight dies*
Well... That escalated quickly
This was a fun little read, if I had to give one criticism it's that the pacing could use work.
Keep up the good work
9291070
Pacing has never been a strong suit. I also have ADHD, so I can't focus on it for very long and then it ends up looking rushed. I do my best with what I can do and what I got. I hope you understand.
Story was decent, if a little short, but needs massive editing for spelling, grammar, and sentence structure.
9298246
Seconded.