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headless_rainbow


I have Rainbow Dash's head. Give me monies or you'll never see it again. Except in the photos I send you of me molesting it with my futa parts.

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"suffocating in scat"

*sips coffee* So this is what I'm waking up to today, huh...
Can't wait

Well this certainly touched a lot of the stuff I like Ovi, Bug TF, Rape , all that fun stuff that I enjoy reading. I can't wait for the sequel to arrive.

Chapter 2: anal impregnation, begging for death, castration, excruciating pussy, getting a new mommy, unconscious gangbang, vore (hard)

getting a new mommy,

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As with every story by my favorite authoress, this was favorited before I even read it. After reading the first chapter, my decision is that your stories never fail to exceed expectations. You still remain my FimFiction girlcrush :heart:

Compared to the other stuff you've written, it seems like you were less interested in this theme, as you repeated the same words somewhat often.

Comment posted by rainbow_swoop deleted Jan 19th, 2019

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You are going to crush me? :rainbowderp:

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What did I seem to repeat the most? Scat isn't something I'm big on, but making it changeling goo-ish actually made it interesting to me.

9411055
Go ahead, just link me to it when you do.

9411118
You shouldn't tease a pure innocent girl like me.:scootangel:

This had been a fun read so fare, can't wait to see the last installment to it, keep it up.

And here I thought I've generally seen it all. Part of me hates this, and another part of me is curious. Though I can see how relinquishing control, even temporarily, to a fantasy such as this could be... freeing, in a way.

In any case, congratulations on capturing some of the most sick and twisted thoughts and emotions in existence. That's not at all easy to do, considering most people keep these locked away under layers of defenses (and hence fail to understand them, let alone appreciate).

I wonder how many people forget that they have them...

The only thing it needs now, I think, is for the changelings to truly believe that they're somehow saving them through this. That'd be delicious.

I'll of course refrain from voting, as per the direction. I'm not even sure which way I would, if I were to.

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Vote if you like even if it's a down-vote. I'm not annoyed by down-votes so much as people too unintelligent to vote based on quality instead of content. If you read it and put thought into it beyond 'ew that's gross' then you're someone I'm writing for.

You're right that doing this because they thought it helped them would be a neat way to take it, but in this case I think the commissioner wants to go more for the 'evil is hot' mentality.

If you like this though, I have some similarly extreme stories that have a lot more plot, and am working on more. Most of my commissions unfortunately will get to the juice with little plot though because of my commission rate being high. If it's not though I get too many.

9491357
Well, that being said - I still don't know which way I'd sway. I don't know if I liked it, if I'm being honest. I don't know if I disliked it, either. I just don't know. It certainly seems to do what it set out for well, I'd say... And secondly, I won't vote simply because I didn't read the entire thing, start to finish - I jumped into the third act because I was curious. If I voted now, I'd be doing you a disservice, I think. Though, judging by my own thoughts, I'm not sure if I could come to a firm conclusion even if I did read everything.

I still am - curious, I mean. There's a part of me that squealed in joy in response to all this, and it's one that I don't often entertain... but which I don't exactly neglect, either... Just wanted to share that I appreciate the work you put in, it certainly shows.

So...did Dinky die? Or did she just stay that way?

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She's happily living as an egg sack for now.

I would love a longer sequel to this, despite the scat. I'm really not into scat, but everything else is just just flipping fantastic as usual.

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Well, it's not normal scat. It's changeling scat. Changelings make everything better.

I read the first chapter when it came out, but somehow never saw there were two more, and I gotta say, I need a sequel, like full length CRV story.

A Canterlot Wedding ruined everything...

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New chapters coming very soon, actually.

9720738
Yes, it is one of the first things in a very long list of things that 'ruined everything' for the show.
Strangely there were always still things to ruin the next time something ruined everything though... :rainbowderp:

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Pretty lit my fellow surface dweller.

Unf.

Gotta love Twilight's selfless submission to the queen and the Hive. Chrysalis has done a masterful job on her.

The tiny changeling in Twilight's ovipositor is also adorable. Getting raped within a few seconds of its birth, just to die (meld?) right after. What a cute little thing :twilightsmile: These new chabgeling, sex-driven personalities forced on ponies intrigue me. Looking forward to new chapters

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I'm glad that you like it. It's so good that Twilight is much more sane and sensible here than her usual persona. :pinkiecrazy:

Unf. This is a strong candidare for best chapter so far. The newborns fucking the stillborns, the siblings fucking each other over the weaker companion they killed and Ruby fucking Apple Bloom through Dinky's severed pelvis hit right in the fetish. Great job, as always

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Yeah, it might be the only story with newborns fucking stillborns on the site. So proud :rainbowdetermined2:

Thats Fu*ked up..... But... Still enjoyed it so I can't complain I guess....

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Yes, I agree, there was a lot of fucking involved

Last chapter was great. It pushed into new directions and Drew a new bar for future work to love up to. And now it's already been topped.

This chapter takes the best elements of the previous one and remakes them with the same fetish intensity. Newborns, stillborns, foal rape, foal murder, you name it. Then It adds more on top of that: pseudo-scat and unbirthing (?) do push this one forward. Furthermore, the definig traits of the whole story come back in force: mind break, changeling conversion, bottomless hunger and eagerness in newly turned changelings. All with the intensity and brutality I've grown to enjoy. Unf.

All of the above works surprisingly well together, making this a complete package of the best elements from the whole story. It stands out for both variety and quantity, without dropping quality one inch. Great job, I'll be eagerly looking forward to more

9759163
Sadly, it's only a matter of time until I reach a point where the next chapter must be shit compared to the previous ones.
However, I think I might be topping the weirdness in chapter 9, so we'll see how that goes when it gets here.

i knew what I was signing up for when I saw the author, no regrets on seeing this through to completion.

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Actually I think this is my first story ever to have 'fetus-on-fetus action' or 'in-womb-orgies' or someone getting born twice by being born while their parent is in someone else's womb. That's pretty crazy. :rainbowhuh:

9854553
your other stories showed me you get rather creative with the gore tag, this only just upped the ante along with me wondering how you were going to get more crazy with things going forward.

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I hate to repeat myself too often, so have had to get pretty weird, yeah. Though part of this one I give credit to the commissioner for. A lot of it is almost purely their ideas.

this one is getting good enough that I have it in tracking so I can read new chapters ASAP.

“Well it’s a good thing we got this part in, at least,” smirked Chrysalis, stroking his shaft once more to let the foal heads clatter onto the floor. “Else the chapter title would have made no sense.”

I was literally going to comment about this.

Honestly the whole point of this chapter title was to rhyme it with the next chapter title. You might can figure what it'll be. :rainbowdetermined2:

You're a real sick fuck, you know that headless?

Keep up the good work, I'm actually enjoying this one.

9411118
I hadn’t realized you were female. I find this to be an interesting discovery. Also, please tell me Twi beats back and goes back to the side of Good before the last word of the story is done. I literally can’t read it if not. Lie to me if you have to, but knowing what’s in store, I haven’t even managed to open Chapter 1. I love your work, though. Meaning that every couple of weeks, I pull it up and just stare down the beginning of Chapter 1, never able to begin reading.
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The changelings doing it with spit/throw-up is even better to me, because it allows a more alien body. Though I do tend towards angsty clop and ‘true love prevails’, ‘everybody deserves a second chance/happiness’ themes, so perhaps that’s why

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I identify as a they. Also I don't technically know how the story will end because it's a commission and I'm only getting given a few chapters at a time to do.

well looks like Pharynx showed his brother how to be loyal to his eventually death.

Found two, this was a pretty interesting scene. P.S. Thorax, you idiot.


At first, she warmed up a bit by shoving it down his filthy throat to shut up his begging. He glugged on it as his neck stepped stretched out and his brother moved up behind him

“He could have just asked,” Chrysalis laughed, but then added ore more seriously. “You, though, defective stock, will cease referring to it as ‘my kind’”

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Thanks! And yeah, a little bit.

9934707
It's an honor to die to get the Queen off! :rainbowdetermined2:

Are you accepting ideas for this story? If so, you could consider urethral play or perhaps milk play. Another, more fleshed out, idea, is having Twilight take out Cadance's overies(a.k.a. her eggs), and fertilize them all at once, leading to thousands of babies. Really, anything involving fallopian tube/ovary play would be fun to see.

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It's up to the commissioner what they want to commission, but I think they read the comments on it because they've done things based on suggestions before.

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