well looks like Pharynx showed his brother how to be loyal to his eventually death.

Found two, this was a pretty interesting scene. P.S. Thorax, you idiot.

At first, she warmed up a bit by shoving it down his filthy throat to shut up his begging. He glugged on it as his neck stepped stretched out and his brother moved up behind him

“He could have just asked,” Chrysalis laughed, but then added ore more seriously. “You, though, defective stock, will cease referring to it as ‘my kind’”

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Thanks! And yeah, a little bit.

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It's an honor to die to get the Queen off!

Are you accepting ideas for this story? If so, you could consider urethral play or perhaps milk play. Another, more fleshed out, idea, is having Twilight take out Cadance's overies(a.k.a. her eggs), and fertilize them all at once, leading to thousands of babies. Really, anything involving fallopian tube/ovary play would be fun to see.

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It's up to the commissioner what they want to commission, but I think they read the comments on it because they've done things based on suggestions before.

nice work

Glorious sordid like always.

Maybe Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle can be turned into changelings and be like servents/slaves to Applebloom.

Before this, I never realized how little clop there was of Thorax and Ocellus. She is shy and scared but she is so powerful, she can turn into a bugbear at any moment. She may actually be one of the strongest changelings alive so a rape fic with her could go either way. A fic of Thorax as king "picking" Ocellus for the friendship school would be interesting.

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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Don't know, sorry. Not feeling well.

When will the next chapter be coming

honestly I did not read the story or even vote I just come here to read the comments to give me a laugh (and I do the same with another of your stories) so what is the purpose of this comment? none just telling you to get on with your life and survive (I don't want to lose the delight of the comment section)
keep writing and good luck
sincerely a potato

“What was I supposed to do?” asked Chrysalis, appalled. “We needed a fresh corpse pit for the orgy and they were wearing PINK! It looked like Pinkie Pie took a shit in the Mirror Pool!”

Okay, that's really funny.

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I'm glad I cheered up depressed tea then
Unless funny things terrify you, in which case I'm very sorry