Velvetverse:Pilot

This is a pilot story-episode.

Velvetverse is the AU story where Twilight Velvet, Cookie Crumbles, Windy Whistles, Rain Flower(Mrs. Shy), Cloudy Quartz, and Pear Butter become the mane 6 before their future daughters do.

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Viper Pit

Viper Pit #1 · Dec 1st, 2018 · 1 · ·

this was nice

Comickook

Comickook #2 · Dec 1st, 2018 · 1 · ·

I have to say this is a really good "Water-testing one-shot". I loved the exchanges, character interactions and sequel hook. The Velvetverse/Motherverse DOES look like it has a great deal of potential. I particularly liked how well you showed the differences these mares have to their future daughters as well as the similarities.

Greatazuredragon

Greatazuredragon #3 · Dec 1st, 2018 · 1 · ·

Very interesting idea, nice work.

JimmyHook19

JimmyHook19 #4 · Dec 2nd, 2018 · 1 · ·

Collab group anyone? =3

Mirror Star

Mirror Star #5 · Dec 2nd, 2018 · 2 · ·

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I wouldn't mind doing that given that it is a concept I do like a lot. It would just come down to who's willing to do it and what their time(s) are like. It's also a lot of work that even I would only have a certain amount of time to really do since I do other stuff, mainly M stories.

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Yeah, I tired to have as much mixture of their personalities and how they relate to their (future) daughters. Granted I took certain things out because some of the Mane 6's traits do come from their fathers (or at least some sides of their fathers).

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Thank you very much.

JimmyHook19

JimmyHook19 #6 · Dec 2nd, 2018 · · ·

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Okie =3

Viper Pit

Viper Pit #7 · Dec 2nd, 2018 · · ·

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I would like to join as well

Mirror Star

Mirror Star #8 · Dec 2nd, 2018 · · ·

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If you guys are serious about talking about that, then come to the Mom 6 group and create a discussion there. I'm the admin of that group. I mainly created that to give out awareness for the concept of the Mom 6 and stories focusing on them in anyway.

JimmyHook19