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In Time of Need

Applejack and Rarity have a fight that leads to a break in their friendship.But what happens when a mutual friend needs them both?

Credit to Magic and Sky for helping me edit the story. :)

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Magicolt808

Magicolt808 #1 · Aug 2nd, 2012 · · ·

Thanks for the credit .

-Magic

SilverSky

SilverSky #2 · Aug 2nd, 2012 · · ·

You didn't need to mention me, but I appreciate it. I hope this story takes off, and gets some steam into your young writing mind.

WarriorOfJustice

WarriorOfJustice #3 · Aug 2nd, 2012 · · ·

The cake is a lie !

Magicolt808

Magicolt808 #4 · Aug 3rd, 2012 · · ·

No indents ._.
Applejack, who won that award for being helpful, is now a huge bitch?
Ponyville* is a noun. zipped* is a verb. Applejack* and Rainbow* are both names.

Every time you introduce a character you use the same adjectives to describe them. Try getting creative.

For some reason it seems everypony is now at least twice as rude to others.

Other than that, its a good start, can't wait to see what actually happens.

Larralina

Larralina #5 · Aug 3rd, 2012 · · ·

1021708 Thank you for you're in put i really needed it Reason why they seem Very bitchy Is because this was based off of a story that really happened in my family and I'm trying to invert the feeling of that true story with ponies pretty much if that makes sense..but anyways Thank you (: