Sunset Shimmer has made everything perfect for proposing to Trixie. A luxurious restaurant, a beautiful ring, and she's invited Starlight and Princess Twilight to be there as witnesses. But when Starlight shows up with Trixie instead, Sunset and Trixie feel emotions rising as their journey of love comes across a bump. Sunset and Trixie confront themselves and each other as they find out if they can take the next step together or not.
An entry into Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest: Journeys
Chapters (1)
. . . This is absolutely adorable.
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Thanks!
It was a bit of a rushed job over the past few days, since work and life had kept me so busy over the last month. I'm glad it turned out good enough to be seen as good.
Fun, Trixie would definitey act like that with herself. You probably want to give it a polish for spelling etc before Sunday, but made me smile.
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I'm glad it made you smile and thanks for the tip; already went back in and corrected some spelling errors. ^_^
Wait, why is Sunset apologizing? Equestrian Trixie came over uninvited and was rubbing in Pedestrian Trixie's how much more accomplished she was.
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Because Sunset blew up at both of them. I mean, if you lose your anger at someone you love, even if something really got under your skin, would you think it's still OK to just yell at them and make them feel bad?
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Fair enough
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Thank you so much, that really means a lot and brings a smile to my face. As for why so few, I don't know. Maybe it's because my story count is so few and I haven't built up an audience yet, or maybe my descriptions just don't provide enough of an interest to grab attention. I'd love some feedback from people to improve even outside of the stories themselves.
And I'm glad the story went as well as you hoped for the ship. It was a rushed job in the last few days before publishing due to not having enough time to write in the last month, so I'm glad even this rushed job could bring a smile to someone, even if it could ever be one person.
In all seriousness, lovely bit of transdimensional shenaniganry. Some people just shouldn't meet themselves, for everyone else's sake. Thank you for this, and best of luck in the judging.
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
That was fun. :D Where's the Comedy tag?
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I didn't add one because I always have a bit of trouble writing comedy intentionally and didn't want to add one if everyone thought there was nothing funny about it. I certainly did try my best to insert comedy and hoped they would make people laugh. Thanks for the boost of confidence; I think I'll go ahead and add it.
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It was definitely funny, and you walked a solid line between the comedy and the drama. :)
Aaahhhh:-). Loved this ship!
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I'm glad you enjoyed.