Separate Neighs

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Sunset Shimmer and Sassaflash kidnap Steve Perry for their Journey cover band.

A last minute entry in Oroboro's Sunset Shimmer Shipping Contest. I'm so sorry judges. You didn't deserve this.

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Quillamore

Quillamore #1 · Sep 10th, 2018 · 1 · ·

I shouldn’t like this as much as I do. In fact, my love of classic rock and bad puns is the only reason this is getting a like and fave. That and because Sherry was stuck in my head when you published this, and I’m a little creeped out at how you were able to read my mind like that.

Also, this whole fic sounds remarkably like a comedy sketch this guy would put on:

To the point where I started reading it in his voice and imagining accordion noises to go with it. Truly, French Accent was too radical to do anything other than randomly vanish right before Judge Cuts.

Super Trampoline

Super Trampoline #2 · Sep 10th, 2018 · · ·

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Girl Can't Help It, she loves rock puns

Claw in Cursive

Claw in Cursive #3 · Sep 10th, 2018 · 1 · ·

It's a good thing this isn't about Maud's & Boulder's relationship, or else it'd be

Sorry, not sorry.

Super Trampoline

Super Trampoline #4 · Sep 10th, 2018 · · ·

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I tried to find a way to use that song in the story, but couldn’t. Good job.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #5 · Sep 10th, 2018 · 2 · ·

Abducted by extradimensional horses... Isn't that what really happened to Elvis?

Look, I'm not going to sugarcoat things, Sassaflash is an alcoholic and she needs to get help.

"You're an alcoholic and you need to get help."
"Shut up, Sugarcoat. Why are you even in Sunset's house?"
"You're that drunk. And you need to get help."

In any case, a fun little romp. Thank you for it. May you only be forced to sing in the greatest of pony cover bands.

AlexTFish

AlexTFish #6 · Sep 16th, 2018 · · ·

Uhh. Most of the various dubious choices here are deliberate, I assume, but I'd've thought that that get-together story should have earned this an M rating?

Corejo

Corejo #7 · Sep 30th, 2018 · 2 · ·

So I opened this from the judges' spreadsheet, where the author's names aren't listed beside their stories for some reason, my eyes read the synopsis first, and without even looking up at the top of the page, I already knew this was a Super Trampoline story. If nothing else, you're unique, and don't let anything stop you from being just that.

As for the story, this was just the right amount of over-the-top stupid it needed to be in order to still be worth my while. As is the norm with the weird shit you write, you managed a few smiles out of me, and that's all I can ask for.

I do, however, still have to ask: what the fuck did I just read?

Super Trampoline