I am a big fan of Rainbow dash, and she is my favorite pony. I am also a big fan of the CMC. Most of my stories will revolve at least mainly around these ponies.
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The CMC love to hang out, solve Cutie Mark problems, and have sleepovers, but the other Crusaders start to notice that they know much less about Scootaloo than they had originally thought. When an event happens that shocks everypony in Ponyville, The CMC are taken on an adventure that digs up parts of Scootaloo's past that even she didn't know about.
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*Massive thanks to my proofreader Mister Doggo. Wouldn’t be able to make this story what it is without him!
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I think Fluttershy can relate slightly. Remember that she, too, had been teased for not being all that great with her wings (unless she was around the animals; then it's as if she were a Wonderbolt).
You do realize the scootaloo lives with her aunts.
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Well, I know she does live somewhere in the actual show, but I have never actually seen her Aunts. But if we had her living normally, how do you make a story out of that? Should I mark this as alternate universe because of that?
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You also realize this is fimfiction. Of course this should have had an alternate universe tag.
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Yes. There should be an alternate universe tag on this now that its confirmed that she lives with her aunts
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Yes you should.
Ok. I will add one. Thanks, and sorry about that.
I think you should continue the story, it’s off to a good start. My only suggestion would be to remember where to put your “?’s” since they seem to get left out a lot.
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Oops, sorry about that. I don’t have a proofreader right now, and when I start typing,I just get completely lost in the story. I’ll try to go back and fix it when I get a chance.
The CMC were in Scootaloo's house in "Flight To The Finish", I believe.
So Applejack and Rarity have little sisters, and Rainbow Dash adopted Scootaloo as parent to foal. The next chapter ought to be fun.
Wouldn't make a bad real episode.
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I’m still waiting on that too. I know it ain’t happening, but that’s why we have Fimfiction.
9189082 Not to mention she has two Aunts revealed in one of the books
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Thank my proofreader for that ending. The way I originally wrote it wasn’t anywhere near as suspenseful, but he helped me rewrite it to fix it. Just wait til next chapter. The suspense gets real.
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Spoiler alert, Scotaloo doesn’t die... or does she?
Why isn't there a sad tag?
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Ran out of tags. It only lets you add 3 tags of a certain kind. I had to choose 3. I might consider changing them around though if you think it’s necessary.
Don’t you mean applejack?
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Yes, thanks for catching that. I fixed it.
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Thanks. Should be fixed to your liking now.
Another good chapter, am looking forward to reading more and seeing what has became of dear little scootaloo...this is turning into quite the interesting story, keep it up!
-frost
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Trust me, there’s more where that came from. I really have to thank my proofreader though, because, thanks to an idea of his, this story is going to be a whole lot more interesting than I first planned.
Glad you enjoyed!
Are we looking at Trap Parents?
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Don’t worry... you’ve only got like 10% of the feels yet. Can’t wait to hit you even harder in the feels! Enjoy!
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I’m sorry, but I don’t know what you mean by trap parents?
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Definition of Trap Parents.
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You’ll just have to wait and see...
Apple Bloom is two words. Why isn't there a sad tag?
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Ran outa space for tags. I used the ones I felt were fitting for where the story is going, although I am thinking about changing it, at least for now.
There is no believable way that Scootaloo was asleep for three days without explanation. Maybe if she got really hurt or was overly exhausted, but otherwise? No way.
I suggest changing it to one day, which is still really long but way more believable. Rainbow Dash can still pass out and Scootaloo can be shocked by the amount of time she spent asleep. If you do decide to stick with three days of sleep then you should both explain it and show it. Show the characters spending those three days worrying and fretting over whether she'll make it or not while berating themselves for not knowing Scootaloo's situation.
You don't have to make this change, it's simply my opinion and advice. just know that when I read that she had been asleep for three days I was taken out of the story.
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Thank you for pointing this out. When I wrote this, I wanted to really emphasize the point of how much Dash cares for Scootaloo, trying to stay up all that time for her. I also have improved in my writing since I wrote this, and it gets better later on. I am personally not that happy with the first chapter either, but if I went back to change it, it would be hard to do while keeping the rest of the story the same. Thank you for pointing this out though, and I will change it to at least two days. I want to keep the emphasis on Dash’s care for Scootaloo.
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1. No she’s not dead. Sorry if I spoiled that, but I didn’t want you thinking she’s dead... yet
2. Yes the romance tag was added for Flutterdash, more will be revealed on this ship soon. I didn’t want to make it too obvious at first, but there’s only so long that you can leave hints to a ship without it becoming too much.
So where were Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle during all this? Did I completely miss them, or were they just never written in?
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They were still sleeping at the time. Their sisters wake them up before they leave. I forgot to write this in at the end when they were leaving. Thank you for pointing this out, it has been fixed.
Lez Yay!
Scootalloo
Scootalloo
Scootaloo
And then it was a dark fic...
Will this story have a happy ending?
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You’ll just have to wait and see. No spoilers!
Scootalloo is not good...
I’m gonna blame it on autocorrect, but in case you genuinely screwed up, it’s spelled ‘Scootaloo’ with one L
And a song reference, because I have to:
Where did I go wrong
I lost a friend
Somewhere along in the bitterness
I would have stayed up with you all night
Had I known...
How to save a life...
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That’s actually a problem I have been having. I am not exactly sure if the exact spelling, and then again, when I try to at least be consistent, auto correct likes to mess me up anyway. Sorry for that.
*Me before reading the story*
I wonder why there’s a Romance tag on this
*Me after reading this chapter*
I now know why there’s a romance tag on this
((I could be totally wrong, but if I’m right, I’m surprised you went with Flutterdash, most Rainbow Dash lesbian shipping fics are Appledash ones))
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It’s Scootaloo, you can see it easily by the tag on the story.
Beaides the fact that there should be a period after emergencies...
You gotta love those emergency blankets you keep for emergencies, you know, just in case you have to visit the Department of Redundancy Department.
I’ll be there for you
These five words I swear to you
When you breathe, I wanna be the air for you
I’ll be, there for you...
I’d live and I’d die for you
Steal the sun from the sky for you
Words can’t say what love can do,
I’ll be there for you.
...
I couldn’t resist, when I condone a ship, I candone a ship.
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Yep, I know that now. Just don’t exactly expect 100% consistency on that. Two l’s compared to one is pretty easy to miss. Thanks for pointing it out though.
Inb4 my Lutheran school checks my iPad and freaks out, however, it can’t be much worse than me actively seeking out OctaScratch fanfiction.
I love how awkward you made the shipping scene, it works perfectly.