This story is a sequel to Please Forgive Me
Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo have only been a family a few months now when Scootaloo has a cold. This leaves Rainbow Dash worried about her own ability to be a mother to Scootaloo, and even worse when she has to work so she can't stay home with her daughter.
So she turns to her best friend Fluttershy to help, but will this lead to something more between the two?
Done for F*** This Prompt#12
Image credit goes to the creator, not sure who they are.
Chapters (1)
i like it and can you make more chapters for this sequel or add more chapters to this sequel
7383566 Well, I have a main sequel called Deepest Desires, this is more of a side story in the same universe, but it will impact the events of it.
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I feel the love to be a bit forced but fair enough. It was a okay story. I think you just need a bit more 'meat' in the flutterdash area.
5.75/10
7384219 Yeah, this is why I don't write romance, I stink at it,
7384240 it alright. It's a lot better than half the stuff I read here at fimfiction.
7387074 Was probably my own fault for making it a sequel to one of my Alternate Universe fanfics instead writing a stand alone in its own universe, oh well.
Did Fluttershy even give Scootalo her homework? And how do we know if she's feeling better? Great story, otherwise.
That was cute.
she's a great mom, it’s been kind of a crazy
I mean it’s just a cold but...
“Nopony knows right away
Cute story.