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In the aftermath of the Ursa Incident, Trixie returns to Ponyville to retrieve her special 'Collection' from the wreckage of her cart. However, she discovers that her 'Collection' is in the hooves of her nemesis Twilight Sparkle, which understandably puts her in a tizzy. Can Trixie get her 'Collection' back?
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DAMN TRIXIE...... you scary....... but you also need a hug dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_grin.png
Poor Trixie T__T Good story, I could see this continuing on as a porn addiction intervention series XD
This is definitely one of the better written stories on this site.
Five out of five Rainbow Dashes for you!
There should definitely be a sequel!
Comedy tags for this? Really?
Begins funny as hell.. ends as one of the saddest things imaginable. This deserves a dark or tragedy tag, maybe both. Strangling colts in angry desperation seems more dark than comedic. A tragedy tag for her inevitable starvation and her inability to cope with her issues.
The overarching theme provides a few giggles, but those quickly died in the plot development.
Regardless, I'd love to see more of this. I'm not sure how you'd continue something like this without it morphing into a shipfic, but still.
I agree wholeheartedly with Alice74 about writing quality.
Trixie needs a good hug!
That's... depressing. This shouldn't really have a random or comedy tag, it should have a sad tag though... It does have comedic moments, but they are more of a relief, not the focus. Still good though.
Dude. continue this story. add the sad or tragedy tags as well.
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Agreed. I'm not sure I'd call it "dark" or "sad" per se, but the ending is a touch depressing. The story reads like a one-shot, but the writing style is good and I'd really like to see some of the possibilities presented here fleshed out.
I can see the reason for the tags they were given. It was funny and the idea of Trixie going apeshit over magazines is way out there. Also the underlining theme behind it all is sad. This Trixie needs intervention in the worst way. I just hope somepony is able to help her when she does hit rock bottom (which personally I think she is almost there, if she isn't already.)
Oh Trixie. You so crazy. And addicted to porn.
The Great and Powerful Trixie secrets reveled.
Poor waifu.
MOAR!! I DEMAND MOAR! I'll watch you even!
This is really well written. I'd love to see it expanded.
Its an interesting idea, the obsession she has over something that takes the place of normal, and healthy,
humanpony interaction. Also how she views herself.I'd like to see more of this story, if you can do it. I think it might be hard, to keep it from just going right to the gutter.
Having said all that...
Why must they torment her so?
I saw that ep they ran, and all *I* learned was 'if you're in tight with, whomever, is in power, be it local, state or the nat'l level, you can leave someone homeless and destitute without fear of official backlash'.
If they really wanted to do a show about bragging, what they could have done was.
Every time we hear 'best young flyer' or anything about being 'awesome' Someone punches Rainbow Dash in the mouth.
C'mon Trixie! Give them their comeuppance! Oh you just laugh it up Mane 6, you and the tyrant Celestia, your time IS coming!!
Well, that went down the chute really fast.
Trixie definitely has an addiction. You could almost make this a longer story.