Have you ever been forced into a position to be something you're not? I'm Walter Krimm, a closet brony during a time when keeping such a fact under wraps is quite difficult. Why? Because bronies all over the world are being turned into characters from the show. Now I'm stuck in the body of perhaps the most arrogant and boastful mare of them all: Trixie Lulamoon.
It took all my willpower not to type this in the third person.
A part of the PonyEarthVerse Writer's Collab.
Cover art by Chocolatechilla, used with the permission of _Kenzu_
Chapters (12)
OH WONDERFUL, THIS AGAIN...
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I believe the reason this keeps happening is because it's all part of one big collab. You know, like the Chess of the Gods thing.
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Daddy Discord is correct, there is a group devoted to writing these. Here is the link if you want to know more.
Here.
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That doesn't make it anymore ok.
Nothing against this fic in particular, just this trope is overused. Even if they are a part of a collab.
Honestly, besides a few common grammar mistakes (apostrophes, commas, caps) , this fic is pretty good. Is the trope overused? Yeah.
But that doesn't mean there's anything wrong with this story in particular. Don't hate on it, there's really nothing wrong.
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Thank you for the defense. I know it can be common for some people to act against tropes like TCB or X is a changeling. But I really think that down voting for genre preference is wrong.
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Would you explain to me why using a trope is so wrong? I understand that it can get to feeling like everyone is beating on a dead horse and that a particular genre might get flooded with absolute crap. But even with something as cliche as X is a changeling you can still have great fics like "The Three Sisters", "Want Me, Need Me, Love Me" and "Solitary Locust" can have subtle stylistic differences and be well written.
Another example of how a story can have offensive content, yet still be well written is this.
Or clop in general that can still be intriguing.
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I actually enjoy this little universe cooked up here. The biggest surprise for me is why the Pinkie one hasn't been made yet.
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Probably because Hoopy Mcgee already wrote a spectacular one.
(Well, kind of. It wasn't specifically his character on Earth as Pinkie Pie, but... yeah.)
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Actually, this one feature a lot of similarities too (but is also very graphic and detailed on the body.
This one also does a good job, and is more situation oriented rather than... body oriented.
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I was talking about the part where you said:
Humans-in-Equestria is not a trope.
Stop trying to justify this.
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oh. I meant for this specific universe. I actually joined the group chronicling these stories a week ago, and out of the Mane 6 only the Pinkie one hasn't been made yet. Sorry for the confusion (well, my thickheadedness) there.
1523522 No worries.
1523413 It's not even because it's offensive, I just never found this trope entertaining, and it's dry and useless now.
Found a couple mistakes. You should probably fix them.
1. "I thought for certain I had turned off the the alarm function," You got a double the in there. Plus, it should end in a period, not a comma.
2.""The great and powerful Walter's feet usually hang out the side of the bed." How strange, my voice seemed strangely feminine." I would have also put the thought that he (Erm, she) spoke in third person.
3.This is just my opinion, but always put thoughts in italics
4. "...woman?" It was final, something was very wrong." I would have put a period instead of a comma.
5. "Or tried to at least," I would have put a comma between to and atleast.
There are alot more, but, uh, thats what I found so more.
I could go over it for you, but, I'm not the best at it. Thats why I have an editor
Idunno, just letting you know.
Plus, Trixie is my second favorite character, next to Octavia of course.
-ThatOneRandomPony (Writer of the Octavia one)
Why do people who have an issue with these stories even click the link? Honestly this fic should have way less dislikes, the writing is solid with just a few minor grammatical errors, and while a little more descriptive language might be preferable, the storyline itself is sound. I would like to see this continue.
1538784 Good to know I have a vote of confidence.
Admittedly by comparison to fictions like "First Pony View" I did rush the story line a little, but I intend to slow down the pacing in future stories.
yay new chapter I can't wait for more *squee*
1552982 If you're looking for frequent updates take a look at the Fluttershy or Pinkie fics, those authors are BEASTS.
already have got the hole ponyearthverse tagged with all the fics favored.
Snails ugh this is going to be bad
oh no, not snails
I feel for ya Trixie/Walter
keep going
spanish snails...ok.
Wow..., just, wow. I feel bad for him/her, people in the real world jump to funny conclusions. If they just sold Trixie a ticket, nothing bad at all would happen to them.
I never liked Snips and Snails [They wer too dumb to be unicorns
that was great
Merges seem to be happening faster than I thought they would in some of the stories of this group.
Eh, maybe I'm just reading too deeply into this.
1670496 I see a great many of these as partial merges, with a full merge being a complete lack of distinction between the two entities.
"Trixie is not interested in shipping." Best line ever.
1670496 Heh. One wonders why Discord caused or let it happen such that the matched bronies/ponies are so similar. It appears that can make the merging easier.
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No one is yet really seems fully merged, but I predict at least the mane six and possibly Trixie ending up as a complete merge.
This story just keeps getting better.
Wow, I'm surprised no one made a comment about this story here in the first chapter. With everyone waking up in a similar manner I feel like all of this could be an adventure game with different methods of moving around. Or could turn this into another Heavy Rain and make every action a quick time event. ^^;
First Pinkie!Reid has clothes and now Trixie!Walter has pants, that'll be an interesting conversation for now.
Wow, his parents are pretty accepting. I like real life now.
This guy's family is pretty nice.
And that's how the evil organization started and the extremist came after our heroes like wildfire.
How does it feel for this dude to be snails. Good thing Walter is loaded so he can at least buy gas for the group.
Wow, this was the first time ever I've read a Pony Earthverse story that had someone actually TRANSFORMING into a pony; even if it's just a paragraph that is very brave of you and it also added in the horror of someone turning into a pony and that Discord can do it whenever to anybody he pleases.
But dang it, is there even another reason why he turned Enrique into Snips while driving. It was almost like Walter was important or something.
Wow you were quick to accept the merging, even though it was a deal. So I think it is for the best. Though I think they should explain the merging more to the other two though.
So that's your first encounter with a PAPA affiliate. If only he was more rational, either way it's time try to get out of here as fast as possible.
Yeah, that pretty much sums up the loud minority's opinion about Christians.
I wish it wasn't as loud.
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I was partially inspired to write this scene by this video here... Be warned, gore near the end.
[youtube=9hSEwy8ZORc]
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RDR: UN.
That's... quite an inspiring scene.
It's defnitely nerve wrecking I can tell you that about your luck. Okay so now you're going to team up with the guy who became a rhyming zebra. This will be interesting. ^^;
poor trixie. poor sidekicks. poor snail you squished. lol
2016507 Yep, a rhyming zebra, and three unicorns, who knows what others we'll meet on this Odyssey to New York?
2016528 I just realized the symbolism in Trixie having stepped on a snail right at the beginning of the chapter. He'll recover quickly enough.
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I'm a bit afriad to read his story though. I think I'm reaching my limit. ^^;
2016615 Limit for what?
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(I'm sorry if saying this for some reason offends you or anyone else or thinking saying it will offend you.) Reading stories about guys becoming mares... that or my attention is spreading to thin to keep up with everyone. -.-"
At least it was only #1.
This i like, the Zecora guy does the rhymes very well. good fortune on your journey to NYC. Nightmare Moon... out!