“Well hey, you’ve changed. You might have done bad things but I believe anypony can become better and you did. You can make up for your past. I’m sure you did what you had to. The Storm King was cruel.”
Nothing wrong with that, but I like it if they also get teached that some battles don't end as peacefully as they want it. I mean without someone dying.
I really liked it again, I haven't thought I would read a soldier story well done, even if it is a pony military. Not sure if you know what I mean if I just say that most soldier stories have some weird flaws in my eyes like a badass soldier that tries to hard to be liked by the readers, has otherwise a weird personality or something similar.
I think from now on I put it in my favourites folder.
9174429 Some of the classes they'll be going to cover the history of the Equestrian military, so I'm sure they'll be learning about plenty of battles that didn't end peacefully... :3c
And tbh I probably won't have anyone trying to be too gung-ho, those kinds of people are generally looked down on and they just make themselves a target for the instructors. That kind of cockiness tends to get beaten out of you. If any of my characters do try to act badass, well... let's just say Eagle knows how to deal with that kinda nonsense.
9174512 nice picture, but I noticed nearly all of them are Unicorns. Since Tempest already has Discord it wouldn't be bad and even if you shouldgive Zinnia a guy "which would probably not happen there right now", I would like it to be something similar like Tempest has with Discord and not the type of relationship where they pack everything Discord and Tempest had so far in one day or week. Long story short I want to get something that makes me like the guy. Well anyway, my real question or suggestion for another Discord scene was something like this : One of the guys in a rare moment they may have, he starts to make some advantages on Tempest no matter if he is pushy or just admiring her and then he is suddenly teleported away and come back in a horrible condition. (Discord).
9174578 Yeah the excessive amount of unicorns will actually be addressed soon but basically I have a headcanon that most of the Royal Guard is unicorns because they're based in Canterlot, which is mostly unicorns, so that's the race that tends to be most inspired to sign up. There are definitely other races in Tempest's flight though and all of them will be described in time.
“Mm, true. Ah well, guess we’ll see. Hey, have you seen this chapter on first aid? These pictures are so gross.”
Tempest looked and saw that she was on one depicting some sort of deep chest wound. “Yeah that’s pretty gross, but it’s much worse to see in real life. Especially when they have a hole in their gut and intestines are spilling out.”
“Um. Not inflicted by you, I hope?”
Tempest leveled her with a serious gaze. “I’ve done some fucked up things in my past, let’s just leave it at that.”
Nothing wrong with that, but I like it if they also get teached that some battles don't end as peacefully as they want it. I mean without someone dying.
I really liked it again, I haven't thought I would read a soldier story well done, even if it is a pony military. Not sure if you know what I mean if I just say that most soldier stories have some weird flaws in my eyes like a badass soldier that tries to hard to be liked by the readers, has otherwise a weird personality or something similar.
I think from now on I put it in my favourites folder.
9174429
Some of the classes they'll be going to cover the history of the Equestrian military, so I'm sure they'll be learning about plenty of battles that didn't end peacefully... :3c
And tbh I probably won't have anyone trying to be too gung-ho, those kinds of people are generally looked down on and they just make themselves a target for the instructors. That kind of cockiness tends to get beaten out of you. If any of my characters do try to act badass, well... let's just say Eagle knows how to deal with that kinda nonsense.
Thanks for the fav, I appreciate it. :D
9174512
nice picture, but I noticed nearly all of them are Unicorns.
Since Tempest already has Discord it wouldn't be bad and even if you shouldgive Zinnia a guy "which would probably not happen there right now", I would like it to be something similar like Tempest has with Discord and not the type of relationship where they pack everything Discord and Tempest had so far in one day or week. Long story short I want to get something that makes me like the guy.
Well anyway, my real question or suggestion for another Discord scene was something like this :
One of the guys in a rare moment they may have, he starts to make some advantages on Tempest no matter if he is pushy or just admiring her and then he is suddenly teleported away and come back in a horrible condition. (Discord).
9174578
Yeah the excessive amount of unicorns will actually be addressed soon but basically I have a headcanon that most of the Royal Guard is unicorns because they're based in Canterlot, which is mostly unicorns, so that's the race that tends to be most inspired to sign up. There are definitely other races in Tempest's flight though and all of them will be described in time.
Tempest is a soldier, most of this is old news