She imagined what it would be like, meeting those other noble ponies who got accepted, going through intense training... maybe even meeting high-ranking ponies and making good impressions that will benefit her later!
I already image the guard members to make hugging competitions and calling themself a badass if they win.
“It’ll be weird learning how to command the Equestrian way rather than the Storm King’s way,” Tempest commented.
To many stories about the guards being idiots make me imaging scenes like the following one. Do you remember when Maud appeared the first time and Pinkie was screaming "OVER HEAR MAUD?"
I image "commanding the Equestrian way", looks like she would scream "I BELIEVE IN YOU" in an overly dramatic and caring way.
I like this, to me this also felt much better or was looking more right this time, you maybe still know what I mean.
He purred, getting comfortable between her legs. He was so tall that once his hips were against hers, it put his head far above her. She laid back against the pillows, admiring the view. Luckily he was flexible, and he was able to bow his back and bring his upper body down so his elbows were on either side of her. A similar trick with his neck and then his lips were hovering against hers.
He could probably wrap his neck five times around her and put his had on the same height as hers if he wanted to, can't he make himself longer and all the stuff?
This was a really good chapter. However like in the last story I hope for something funny when she is in the guards barrack. I like to think there are still some ponies that either haven't seen Discord or aren't comfortable with him. I want a direction that isn't exactly just "oh hello Discord". I think I found out that I'm especially fixated on situation comedy (or how it's called in english).
edit: Not sure if you need a respond to the sex part, but I liked it. Like I already said, for my taste it felt right enough and I think I will be comfortable with pretty much everything with this couple.
9132414 Yeah Tempest will probably be a pretty firm commander anyway. They keep telling her to reel it in and she's like "Hey, what I'm doing works right? RIGHT. Let me do my job" She won't be mean for no reason but she's not going to take any crap.
As for the sex, Discord COULD shrink himself and he absolutely would if she asked, but I imagine she likes it when he stays the way he is. He's all bendy, he's fine either way. :'D I'll probably write more NSFW one-shots with them though, they have a really fun dynamic and I have ideas. :3c
As for the sex, Discord COULD shrink himself and he absolutely would if she asked, but I imagine she likes it when he stays the way he is.
I actually only meant wrapping his head somehow so that he maybe wouldn't need to try t o break his neck or something while looking at her. I just meant for him there is not exactly the need to have the same problems like Capper.
I already image the guard members to make hugging competitions and calling themself a badass if they win.
To many stories about the guards being idiots make me imaging scenes like the following one. Do you remember when Maud appeared the first time and Pinkie was screaming "OVER HEAR MAUD?"
I image "commanding the Equestrian way", looks like she would scream "I BELIEVE IN YOU" in an overly dramatic and caring way.
I like this, to me this also felt much better or was looking more right this time, you maybe still know what I mean.
He could probably wrap his neck five times around her and put his had on the same height as hers if he wanted to, can't he make himself longer and all the stuff?
This was a really good chapter. However like in the last story I hope for something funny when she is in the guards barrack. I like to think there are still some ponies that either haven't seen Discord or aren't comfortable with him. I want a direction that isn't exactly just "oh hello Discord".
I think I found out that I'm especially fixated on situation comedy (or how it's called in english).
edit:
Not sure if you need a respond to the sex part, but I liked it. Like I already said, for my taste it felt right enough and I think I will be comfortable with pretty much everything with this couple.
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Yeah Tempest will probably be a pretty firm commander anyway. They keep telling her to reel it in and she's like "Hey, what I'm doing works right? RIGHT. Let me do my job" She won't be mean for no reason but she's not going to take any crap.
As for the sex, Discord COULD shrink himself and he absolutely would if she asked, but I imagine she likes it when he stays the way he is. He's all bendy, he's fine either way. :'D I'll probably write more NSFW one-shots with them though, they have a really fun dynamic and I have ideas. :3c
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I actually only meant wrapping his head somehow so that he maybe wouldn't need to try t o break his neck or something while looking at her. I just meant for him there is not exactly the need to have the same problems like Capper.
Okay that sounds nice.
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Ohh I see what you mean. Ye him wrapping his neck around her would also be a good choice