But would I be a good Messiah with my low self-esteem? If I don't believe in myself would that be blasphemy? - Bloodhound Gang; Hell Yeah
I'm was imprisoned here when I told my family I saw figures speaking to me. My family thought I was crazy, so they got me incarcerated in a mental hospital... what scares me is if they might be right.
Thanks to MyLittleBronyDude for being a great editor.
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this story is getting interesting
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Thanks ^^
You're very welcome, I m looking foward to see what happend next
I can't wait to see what happens next!
This story has an interesting premise behind it, but I feel it's a bit rushed and scattered. I'd reccommend focusing on some of the characters to better understand their appearances, ideas, morals, and motives. So far, all I know is that the lead character killed this Doctor's wife somehow. Not a bad start though. Kewp it up!
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Thank you, and yes, I know they're rushed, I'm gonna smooth things out later, I just wrote them to get my ideas down and not forget about it
Bring your friends and Starlight? The term friends does cover Starlight too, you know.
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Yes
Just a couple of missing words for this one.
Again, just a missing word and a punctuation error.
Putty is spelled with ‘t’ instead of ‘d’.
You just needed a space between ‘you’ and ‘don’t’ and there was an unneeded comma.
Straitjacket is spelled ‘strait’ instead of ‘straight’.
You just needed an ‘o’ in ‘too’, you spelled straitjacket wrong again and there was another unneeded comma.
That’s all the mistakes for this chapter.
This story sure looks interresting amd I like it so far. I will keep an eye on it
9434159
Yay
Wow this book good have a like and fav
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Thanks ^^
Quote: Murder time.
9481903
Lol
9620742
Could you elaborate.
9620843
I suppose, I didn't tgink that way but I can see it
This is so cool
9637428
Thanks
Welp. Cancelled :l
9682529
Hiatus would probably be better
is this dead
10267481
No, I've just lost a bit of motivation as a writer, whenever I feel motivated again, I'll attempt to continue this, for now though, it's on hiatus
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I can't wait
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Sorry
10276811
sorry for what. There nothing wrong
10277215
Making you wait, I didn't realize people actually wanted to read my garbage
10278474
First its not garbage, you write good storys and secondly its fine as long as it will continue I can't be mad
10278477
I don't think I write good things, but alright... And it might continue soon...
10280994
You do don't put yourself down like that. They are good storys. Have a good day/night
hay do more chapters
Great work keep it up
Wait, how did he go from having hands to hooves?
They would have to fight me.
Honestly, I wouldn’t answer any of Christoph’s or his researchers questions until they treat me with respect.
What was she mouthing?
So she’s the new guard?
Wait, then how come only he can see them?
Why not fight back?
What the f*ck is he talking about?
Why?
Non of your f*cking business.
1. You were the worst.
2. Your not worthy to say that name.
I don’t hope to speak to you.
Why?
Is this story dead?
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No, I just been busy
10759600
Thank god.
Oh damn, it's starting to get juicy. Love it