Vinyl writes to Octavia, explaining what perfection is.
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I dunno, Vinyl seems really out of character by popular fannon's standards
Great, inspirational story nonetheless, very very good.
5 Stache's for you sir.
999643 Everypony can have their moment. Also I like your profile pic.
Great piece. Fave and a like from me.
Cheers,
Perrohambre
Nicely done!
I like to think that Vinyl has a deeper side and this captured it well.
Thumbs up
You, my friend, have just made FIMfiction 20% cooler.
I rate this five rainbow dashes.
Hats off to you, my good pony.
A very interesting concept. Short, but rather well written, capturing the... wonder and mystery of perfection.
I can't pin it down, but there is something in this story that just seems to cause conflict in my mind. No, It's not the fact that Vinyl is stepping out of character, though that is odd. No, It's not the fact that Octavia and Vinyl seem overdone; far from it. I also sincerly doubt that it's the lack of background. That makes it more fun for the imagination. Maybe I'll never figure it out. I just feel as if something doesn't match up.
Any way about it, nice story. Now, excuse me while I retreat into deep thought.
Very nice, very nice indeed. Well done
Octaviac995, maybe it's the mystery as to where Octavia is, or the feeling like she is no longer living (even though she said she sent her headphones). I agree though, I can't seem to wrap my mind around it. It was very well written though and I enjoyed the depth that Vinyl put into the letter.
That was great, but it really is an odd letter for Vinyl
which of course is why it's my favorite part of the story. Partially because I'm writing a fic now where Vinyl is classier, and even love learning, too bad it'll never be as well written as this
oh and now I'm rambling...
Cooool!!!
ಠ_ರೃ FEEL LIKE A SIR
That was very good! I love your take on Vinyl. Ignore these silly people saying she's "out-of-character," for there's no character for her to be out of. You've done a neat job with her here.
O_o That was really good. Who would have thought Vinyl had it in her? It's nice to see something just so simple, but so good, for once. It's short, sweet, and bloody fantastic. Good Job.
1002522
That was the best short review I have gotten, so thank you.
1000950
Just write, and don't be discouraged. I say good luck on your endeavours, and hope that you become a great writer.
It's thought provoking, but not necessarily a good way.
I can't put my finger on it though.