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Immortals, men and women from all over the world who live hundreds, even thousands of years. Throughout the centuries they have walked among mortals in secret, moving and taking new identities as needed to stay hidden. Some abuse their power, treating normal humans as their playthings and carving a path of destruction to satisfy their selfish greed. Others use their gift to act as heroes, and protect humanity from evil.

But one thing holds true for all immortals. They fight a secret war amongst themselves, each with the goal of being the last. When a challenge is called forth two immortals meet blades and fight to the death. The victor takes his foes head and with it their power. There is only one rule in these battles, an immortal cannot kill on holy ground.

One of them is Duncan Macleod, a warrior born in 1592 in the Scottish Highlands. He has spent 400 years fighting evil immortals and protecting us in secret. Tonight with the drop of a head a great evil sets her sites on him, and lures him into her world.

Edit: Completely overhauled with the help of the people in the TvTropes Pony fic thread.

Edit: This version is dead, check my profile for the new version of the story where it will continue.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 25 )

This looks interesting. There are a few grammar issues nearer the beginning of the chapter, but those seem to have vanished by the end.
Not much of a Highlander buff, but what you have so far looks like it's set up rather well.
Would like to see where you take this.

1000026

Yeah, I hadn't written in a while when I started this, I couldn't find any proof-readers to speak of either.

Thanks:)

Very nice man, I LOVE it!
... and sorry again for not getting a hold of some proof readers...

1000192 Hey man, Just got in and had a few free minutes so read over the story. I like the way you are working it, but found a few errors. I'll send you a message later this evening after I read over it a couple more times. Just wanted to let you know so you didn't think I forgot about ya. :twilightsmile:

1112178

Okay:) Tell me what you think of the content to so I now where to improve my creative skills.

Good concept and with a little work it can be a great story

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You guys are into this thing a little too much. Seriously.:ajbemused:

1216033
I'm not trying to be a Buzzkill man, I'm just saying stuff, that's all.:twilightoops: You're the one who's taking things seriously.

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We're not taking anything seriously, we're just screwing around.

At least I'm not.

You know what, I'm sorry.:ajsleepy: Forget I said anything.:facehoof: Return to your battle.

1645550

That's okay, it was a silly convo from the start. I just had some stupid to air out of my system:b

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