Upper Crust loves to watch Green Bean, the pony who does all of the yard work do his thing. He's cute, strong and a real stallion. With her husband Jet Set out of town on business she decides to do more than just watch him trim the bushes.
After all, she's a cute unicorn. It shouldn't take much to convince him of what she wants ... right?
(Tagged Sex because of the obvious intentions of the character(s))
eh, 3 out of five, kept interest but didn't go no where along with other things, good luck on your next piece
Your Predator references are not lost on me.
Aside from a few typos, this is very entertaining.
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I went through the story again and punched it up a little and tried to fix some of the typos. I do have to say that I truly hate how this website just smashes all of my sentences and some words together when I copy the document from my word program. I say that because I can look at the original document and there isn't that particular problem.
In a way it's sort of why I don't ever want to do longer stories on here because I really don't want to keep going back in an attempt to find site created errors. I mean... if I screw up on my own that's one thing. I don't need more "help" from a site to be less perfect.
Anyway, that's my rant. I'm glad you liked the story though regardless of some of the issues and ... I do love me some Predator.