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MisterNick


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Princess Celestia was dreaming of the last piece of cake in the fridge. However, when she woke up the next morning she found that the cake had disappeared. Upset, she rounded up the most likely suspects Blueblood and Cadence.

Which one of the foals ate her cake?

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You were warned, Celestia. You were warned.

Nice story. It escalated well, and it was fun watching Blueblood and Cadance bounce off of each other. The ending was a pleasant surprise. Have a like.

Talk about getting caught with your booves in the cake plate.

So...who ate it? Blueblood? Chrysalis? The Storm King? Or Cadance? :pinkiegasp:

I wonder what the guards' faces looked like when Blueblood told them he was busy 'spanking the bugbear'.

Fun stuff. :rainbowlaugh: I love it how we’re all expecting the villain to be one pony, then suddenly things aren’t as they seem!

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Yes she was, though to be fair to her if I had a kid around me who said some of the things he said I'd probably take his word with a grain of salt too!

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Yay! The story was liked and now the fun has been... increased by a significant percentage possibly to twice the amount of before!

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Maybe so... or maybe not... dun Dun DUN!

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Well if I'm being honest I wasn't there for when the piece of cake was eaten. Or maybe... I was! Then again one of those other individuals does seem plausible... who do you think did it?

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I don't know but I'm sure the glancing back and forth would have been rapid at the very least. It would certainly be a conversation among the guard though later that day. Of this I am certain!

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This was probably the most fun I've had writing a story in awhile. One of these days I'm going to have to finish up the drafts of the other two Writeoff stories I did. Just to see if they come together well if anything.

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I think Queen Chrysalis ate it. Maybe she thinks chocolate tastes like love. Or she just wanted to get Blueblood into trouble because he actually had to ask her which planet she wanted to take over. Because ponies can travel to other planets. :rainbowlaugh:

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I dunno. I mean Luna did get bang zoomed straight to the moon. Maybe Blueblood is the "visionary" behind the next series. Time will tell. But yeah... I think Chrysalis probably ate the cake too. It's chocolate. Bugs dig chocolate.

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