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Netalaas


A writer just trying to get his work spread out in the internet.

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Bet you thought it was a great idea to put this out... pity DE brought out the "mess up the UI completely" update just beforehand. Thanks, DE!

Now I go to actually read the chapter! XD

EDIT: I am now intrgued, Tenno. Have a like and a follow. Wonder how the girls will react to Nyx and Saryn?

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Huh, I never knew the UI was messed up. I guess that is a factor in my first story's poor staked viewing as it has received nor dislikes than likes. Though this doesn't change the fact that the old story needs to be improved for better quality reading. Anyway thanks for reading this chapter and to be honest I was surprised by how well received this story was back on the other site. Though I have no idea what made it popular.

ok so far.
lets see where you take this.
when you reach 10 chap's I'll like or dislike and either add it to my tracking list or leave it behind.

By the way if I notice inconsistencies with the game i will try to point them out.
warframe is my life.
too many hours.

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also, its only the console version that is buggy

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Yeah, I tried my best as I mostly used my observations with the games. You most likely know more than I do as lore that wasn't given to me on a silver platter most likely will not get mentioned. Also the ship is going to be a lot bigger on the inside. To tell you the truth this story has been finished for a while now and I don't plan on fixing some inconsistency's as I'm already stretching myself here. I post the next chapter sometime today so I hope you enjoy it when it comes out. Also just to let you know I had no idea there was a simulator room that can spawn enemies, this information will be important later.

"Latron."
"Grrrrrrakata."
"No... Latron."
"Twooooooo... Grakata!"
*sigh*

Clem. Grakata. Formation Bravo!

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will you be willing to pm me a link to the original?

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Sure, hold on. I'll send it as soon as I can.

I've been reading the original and the only thing that irks me unbearably it the misunderstanding that the liset is the orbiter
liset
http://warframe.wikia.com/wiki/Liset
orbiter
http://warframe.wikia.com/wiki/Orbiter
one drops you off and one flies through space.

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Huh, didn't know this was a thing. As I said before I never knew this was a thing among other things. I'll make sure edit that information when putting in future chapters.

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other than some lore tidbits I noticed missing, you did pretty good.
by the way, there is room for a sequel...
will you?

8977622
Honestly, I wanted to not work on it further due to my other stories, but considering the number of people wanting more...probably but it may be a while before I tackle the sequel for this story. I don't want to stretch myself thin here, but I will admit it was fun writing Hayden's personality as he is by far the funniest thing I wrote about.

I like it so far.




Also, I would’ve gone to Maroo, who’s better at finding a thief than a thief?
But this isn’t my story, and I like Darvo and Clem.

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Yeah, she was an option on my radar when making that chapter, but I wanted an excuse to have Darvo and Clem show up in the story. Because I love those idiots.

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I completely understand!
I loved their quests!

I have not read yet but if by the time the book is finished you better include mesa and octavia(favorite frames). And even if you don't i'll still read... probably ;) oh and don't forget limbo prime is coming out soon might want to add him... because limbo is broken

FILTHY TENNO MAGGOTS! BRING ME MORE CAKE!

Sunset, feeling guilty? Need to atone?I'll oblige. Let my gavel ring justice off your thin skull.
- Tyl Regor
best voice of the Grineer

Look at these ponies, they come to this place when they know they are not pure. Tenno use the keys, but they are mere trespassers. Only I, Vor, know the true power of the Void. I was cut in half, destroyed, but through it's Janus Key, the Void called to me. It brought me here and here I was reborn. We cannot blame these creatures, they are being led by a false prophet, an impostor who knows not the secrets of the Void. Behold the ponies, come to scavenge and desecrate this sacred realm. My brothers, did I not tell of this day? Did I not prophesize this moment? Now, I will stop them. Now I am changed, reborn through the energy of the Janus Key. Forever bound to the Void. Let it be known, if the ponies want true salvation, they will lay down their arms, and wait for the baptism of my Janus key. It is time. I will teach these trespassers the redemptive power of my Janus key. They will learn it's simple truth. The ponies are lost, and they will resist. But I, Vor, will cleanse this place of their impurity.

Cold, the heart of Sunset Shimmer
Hard, the mission that he lost
Push, through the darkest glimmer
Feel what tubemen' s death has cost

Will we see a fight between Twilight and Vay Hek in the future?

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Don't count on it for him, but you can bet on another grineer heavyweight showing up to fight the ponies.

Comment posted by heavens-champion deleted Aug 21st, 2018

This is really good! Keep up the amazing work.

Red Veil and New Loka

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Thanks, I'm trying to give the same quality to the chapters of my other story, well the chapters I fixed up anyway. Still have to play the game of catch up before moving forward.

I have a Tenno and Warframe if you need an extra. I can link them to you if you want? Heck I'll do so anyway, but only because I want to help a fellow Tenno.

https://www.deviantart.com/knightwolf1785/gallery/66268998/Warframe-pictures

You would think Hanhow would tell Stalker to destroy those new grineers before they get out of hand and be forced with another dangerous obstacle.

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You would think that considering the stalker made an appearance at the beginning of this story, but sadly the man is on his rage break right now.

Leave it to Regor to have a backup plan and body. The girls are going to have to help kill him this time. No getting around it at all.

That was awesome! I can't wait for the next story in this arc. ^^

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Glad you enjoyed it, you can read what is available in my other story while you wait. I can't guarantee you'll enjoy this one as much as this story, but I think you might like it.

“I might as well, my trigger finger been itching and the only cure is the various methods of death I can deal with the weapons I obtained.” Hayden then began to reminisce the day when he first got his hands on the Hek shotgun, it was the happiest day of his life especially when he mod the ammo to become explosive, he never seen so many enemies fly off in the distance before.

Do you have craptacular aim and no patience for the reload that is swapping a hydro flask glued to one of the barrels? Do you hate that it takes an incarnon to get the magazine into double digits?
Well, trash that stinky Hek and get yourself a Kohm, the slickest piece of kit ever devised by Grineer hands. Moar bullets. Moar spread. Moar reload speed. And MOAR DAKKA.
Stand still like an asshole and lay into the pack of infested trying to get through the pipe in the Grineer mines, chukchukchukchuk they getting no closer than 15 meters.
This post has been sponsored by Kohm gang

“So…Excalibur, Hek, Vasto, and Broken-War, got it. You will be teleported with the equipment operator.”

I know 'who asked?' but my ol' reliable is Mag, Strun, a kitgun of catchmoon, lovetap, and bellows, and an excessively upgraded zaw of kronsh, korb, and jai. Hits like an absolute truck, folding grineer in half with sundering weave's low swing to the ass

This set of weapons is as silent as he can get

Laughs in Banshee
Sonicor go boing

Rarity he wasn’t expecting much due to her fashion minded nature and knack for identifying precious gems as she explained to him. For her it was tricky to find an appropriate frame to train her with but decided to use the Mag Warframe to train her and surprisingly it worked as she discovered the ability to pull object toward her with great force and stop them before they can hit her as she practiced on the Tenno.

a fucken tragedy, I get back to warframe after a week of broken tv/holiday vacation, I have $100 in cash that I plan to use all on PlayStation cards the next day. I'm browsing the prime vault and see Mag Prime is expiring in 3 fucking minutes, unlikely to be seen again until next year. Why must life be so cruel?

Hayden after leaving the room headed back to his ship while playing multiple scenarios in his head how it would all play out. However, the thoughts remained incomplete as he had no idea where the battle is going to take place. It didn’t help that he may have to lighten up training a bit so they can be ready for the battle once the other Tenno came back with information. A large scale battle is going to take place and Hayden wonders if he and the girls are ready for it. These thoughts continue to haunt him as he step back into his ship as it disengaged from the docks and flew back into the void in order to stay hidden from prying eyes. He deeply sighed as he made his way to meet up or wake up the girls but instead was stopped in his tracks as he heard the sounds of blasting, grunting, and smack talk coming from the training room. Opening the door leading into the room he was met with the near chaos of the girls using their powers on hologram targets recreated from the data he scanned over the years.

I skimmed to the last sentence by accident and worked my way back, a little disappointed that they aren't in the simulacrum (even if the logistics of that are impossible for organic creatures) but I'm more disappointed that Simaris hasn't shown up. Where is my cranky self-aggrandizing archive curator?

“Oh really? Then by that leap of logic I’m going to guess that’s your world of origin?”

I say let him through, the portal closes soon so he'll be trapped in Equestria vastly outnumbered by those of equal or greater fighting prowess when he gets put in a pony body, and the grineer empire will be severely hobbled without him

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