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What? Warframe and mlp? Must read. Will edit when finished.
Edit: well. I am quite surprised at the quality of this. At first I thought it was going to be shoddy insert of a character into another world. You surprised me. Do not fail me with your future mission of writing more, Tenno.
Ah, a fellow tenno.
TENNO SKUUUUUUUUM!
Valkyrie's not my top choice in a frame but any chance to read an mlp/warframe story with Luna and im instantly invested. Well done on the first few chapters! It's a little quick on the pace for myself but I did enjoy the read and am looking forward to the next instalment.
Also very cool use of what im thinking was the stalker, can't wait to see him pop up again. Got my own revenge on him the other day, gotta love that paris prime... Its almost cheating lol.
Interesting concept... Not a Tenno in Equestria, but a pony in the Origin System.
Also Valkyr and Luna are interesting choices...
Keep it up, Tenno! Faved for e-mail notifications.
Ah, great. I was hoping you would mention how Luna actually got to the solar system this chapter. I know some of the Warframe lore, not a lot, but enough and it seems you are doing a pretty good job. I love how everything is so alien but at the same time it really isn't that far of a stretch from some current cultures. You could do with a bit more world building though it is sort of hard to grasp where they are. It might be different if you have played the game but it should still be addressed.
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I will address a few things like the symbol of Valkyr's hand and who the Stalker is (based on the Codex entry). In ch.3 I've been implying that before Valkyr's capture, she and Stalker were like teacher and student, however, as the story says, Valkyr knows little of his past.
Pretty much, next chapter is back story for the Stalker.
Yay another Warframe crossover. And my favorite Frame is Mag.
wow, I can honestly say I never thought that anything good could come from the stalker. the amount of times hes trolled me and my friends on warframe is just plain stupid. 7 times! consecutively!
anyway, good story, to be honest I just wish that you would expand on the characters a bit more.
good luck!
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WHAT KIND OF DEATHMARKS HAVE YOU BEEN GETTING
also, yeah, character development is not my strongest point, but ill try to work on that
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I had 4 death marks at the time: vay hek, raptor, ambulas and tyl regnor.
after a while when he came after us it wouldn't even say a name! and he even said we had a death mark for killing the stalker once!
it was trolling to its max
More!