"Latron."
"Grrrrrrakata."
"No... Latron."
"Twooooooo... Grakata!"
*sigh*

Clem. Grakata. Formation Bravo!

8972361
will you be willing to pm me a link to the original?

8973726
Sure, hold on. I'll send it as soon as I can.

I've been reading the original and the only thing that irks me unbearably it the misunderstanding that the liset is the orbiter
liset
http://warframe.wikia.com/wiki/Liset
orbiter
http://warframe.wikia.com/wiki/Orbiter
one drops you off and one flies through space.

8976980
Huh, didn't know this was a thing. As I said before I never knew this was a thing among other things. I'll make sure edit that information when putting in future chapters.

8977305
other than some lore tidbits I noticed missing, you did pretty good.
by the way, there is room for a sequel...
will you?

8977622
Honestly, I wanted to not work on it further due to my other stories, but considering the number of people wanting more...probably but it may be a while before I tackle the sequel for this story. I don't want to stretch myself thin here, but I will admit it was fun writing Hayden's personality as he is by far the funniest thing I wrote about.

I like it so far.

Also, I would’ve gone to Maroo, who’s better at finding a thief than a thief?
But this isn’t my story, and I like Darvo and Clem.

8997920
Yeah, she was an option on my radar when making that chapter, but I wanted an excuse to have Darvo and Clem show up in the story. Because I love those idiots.