Interventions

Derpy is the subject of a highly random intervention or two.

Written for The Writeoff Association's "TBD" contest, which I decided meant "Totally Banned Derpy".

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Da Fennec

Da Fennec #1 · May 31st, 2018 · 3 · ·

Well this is RANDOM

Olden Bronie

Olden Bronie #2 · May 31st, 2018 · 6 · ·

Derpy is secretly a genius. I'm happy to see someone else has finally acknowledged this fact and shared it with the world.

Soon the heretics will see the truth!

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #3 · May 31st, 2018 · 9 · ·

Exquisite use of Best Pony. Thank you for it.

G-AB Acid

G-AB Acid #4 · May 31st, 2018 · 4 · ·

I tend to dislike simpleton!Derpy fics because they usually are tearjerkers by hammering home how Derpy is depressed because others treat her poorly or some other reason. A seemingly clear contrast to her seemingly upbeat self in the show.

That is why I don't know why the fuck I keep doubting you.

Simple. Concise. Slice of life with a dash of random. Thoroughly enjoyable.

Thanks again, T.Q.

hawthornbunny

hawthornbunny #5 · May 31st, 2018 · 3 · ·

I for one welcome our secret rabbit toy factory overlords.

LiboR

LiboR #6 · May 31st, 2018 · · ·

the Doctor was here, and Lyra Heartstrings, and Bon Bon. Plus, there was that pony whose name I keep forgetting,

I feel that this went directly from the author's heart.

The story gave me a good laugh. Otherwise... there's not much to say, really. It was random, simple, random, and foremostly random.

mishun

mishun #7 · May 31st, 2018 · 1 · ·

"Secret rabbit toy factories," Derpy corrected. "Also secret rabbit toy factories. I know that's kind of confusing, but I'll add a chapter or two to explain the difference."

It's rabbits that are secret in former case, and toys in latter case? Or rabbits and toys are both secret for latter one?
Taking into account 3 nouns here, there could be 2^3 - 1 states of secretness total, that further adds at least one more level of secretness on it's own. Layers and layers!