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WrathOfGod519


[26/08/2013] darf: people like you make me fucking sick [26/08/2013] darf: i hope you become a paraplegic you shitcunt [left_insert][left_insert][left_insert][left_insert][left_insert][left_insert]

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zel

So... So beautiful:pinkiesad2:

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just wait till they kidnap scootaloo.

zel

1194823 MY BODY IS READY AND MY PANTS ARE DOWN

1196531
Wait to you see when they kidnap scootaloo.

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I make sure the ingredients are right, yup I checked and double checked ‘em,"
Then I take my tasty batter and shoot it up my rectum!"

Oh. My. Fucking. God. Yes.
That was a work of literary genius. :rainbowkiss:

1198306
To be fair, Don'tWannaKnow came up with the song lyrics, everything else was by me.

Strangely enemas indeed. This made me laugh! I like how Pinkie acts completely in character while she's shitting all over the place. All the best fics about Pinkie being a psychopath/pervert etc. keep her in character. I'd definitely enjoy seeing more!

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I will finish it. And when I do you'll be quite pleased with the result (what they do to scootaloo will be so bad it'll make "A fun day" look pleasant... probably... I don't know those are pretty big boots to fill but I'll try.)


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Finished chapter 1, Tell me what you think.

Chocolate enemas...

I...I...I wuv you, Wrath! :heart:

zel

NOT ENOUGH ENEMAS
Also, you have been reading through DWK collection for too longdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png

Woah woah woah woah thats pretty fucked up.... but hilarious and genius!:rainbowlaugh:

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The bad stuff hasn't even happened yet, also how did you find this?

1343694 I think I found it somewhere on a page or something, either way its pretty good so far!

zel

OH GOD THAT IMAGE
GOD
GOD
GOD

Well it's been 4 hours over the course of 13 weeks in the making. But finally this piece of shit fanfiction is done, or rather I've accepted I'm far too lazy to finish it. I hereby dedicate this to sierra_seven_ and all my good frenemies down at the TWE who loved this fic so much.

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Here's to you guys, you magnificent bastards.
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Edit: oh wait, let me correct a small mistake. There is no TWE because the mods got tired of their bullshit. Honestly I could not find a reaction image to display how funny I found this.

The song was a work of GENIUS.

However, the second chapter wasn't as funny. I mean, it wasn't supposed to be, obviously. My reaction to chapter one:

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... and then to chapter two:

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... which is just me, I guess. I expected scat and vomiting school children, and ended up with a brutally tortured Scootaloo. I wasn't expecting it, otherwise I would have enjoyed it a lot more. HOWEVER, it is my OWN FAULT for not seeing it coming. TOTALLY MY BAD.

I'm really hung over. That's my excuse.

I have definitely enjoyed everything - especially your Pinkie dialog - prior to chapter two, thus the thumbs up. That cover art is incredible too.

For some reason I wasn't following you. I rectum rectified that, most assuredly!

1720752
That's the point of troll fics, you just don't see it coming.

1720774

Yup. Which is why I feel SO DUMB.

Lesson learned, eh.

1198306
I'm so sorry about your group, I really am. We can still be friends right?

Warning, troll fic.

Doing it wrong.

:facehoof:

it's not a trollfic if you tell people it's a trollfic. but hilarious otherwise
also scootbuse is best abuse

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Alright thank you for that, I've fixed it.

I'm gonna Take a BIG guess here and say Pinkie uses her Shit to make cupcake frosting
Also that cover image just creeps me the fuck out
Have a thumbs up :pinkiehappy:

This is going to be something :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I would not like the next segment to take as long getting written.

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You explore the weirdest shit ever sunshine. Also that was painful.

1728433 Painful? I added some smileys, I hope that helps. The lyrics largely portrayed my thoughts
If it does not, we'll just have to embrace our path :pinkiehappy:

That quality is shit because apparently there are no better versions on youtube

1720836 Dude I thought you were above scootabuse! :fluttercry:

:heart: i like this story! I'm kind bucked up in the head!

I...
I just... NO!

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Seriously.
Dude.
What the fuck?

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Thank you for your helpful constructive criticism, I shall use it to better my writing.

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It wasn't really constructive criticism, I was just stating my opinion of this story.
Your writing is actually pretty good.

I actually kinda like this story, it's just kinda messed up. It made me laugh a few times despite that it is pretty messed up in my opinion.

I'm so confused, why is the frosting enema so arousing?

i am surprised that i managed to read chapter 2 without vomiting or feelink sick at all. i saw your comment on soggy waffle and i just checked this out, sadly only part 2. i will read part 1 now and tell you ow i feel.
oh and absent the subject, you are a good writer.:pinkiehappy:

just read part 1. they are both awful, the only good part is the actual scat, i dont really like scootabuse. any abuse on that matter. well the song was just genius! keep doing what you do!

1196531 :rainbowderp:That is one of the greatest things I've ever seen.

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