The End of Rainbows

A being of unbelievable power births a warrior to cleanse the taint of the pegasi and their Rainbow Factory, at all costs.

This is a spin-off of Rainbow Factory.

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zel

zel #1 · Nov 5th, 2012 · · ·

The ending...
Oh my god, so touching.

CrimsonEquine

CrimsonEquine #2 · Nov 5th, 2012 · · ·

1569012 Quite!

Twifight Sparkill

Twifight Sparkill #3 · Nov 6th, 2012 · · ·

I neatly curled up into a tiny ball and wept. The vastness of the world you painted left me breathless and wanting - I was a mixture of awestruck and alarmed, wishing I could somehow help in this crushing, awful injustice your protagonist suffered through.

There may not be enough tears left me now, my eyes left reddened and pained. Indeed, there is nothing more satisfying than an epic conflict of this magnitude.

Truly, we are blessed.

Brutalassmaster

Brutalassmaster #4 · Nov 7th, 2012 · · ·

I take it it's one of those stories that lets you decide the ending? Well here's mine.

"Who are you? what is your identification?" questioned the two pegasi. The warrior solomnly raised his sword and brought it down unto one of the pegusi's head, only to look in horror as he missed, logding his blade into the cloud wall, leaving it stuck as the two infuriated pegusi guards advanced twoards him.

"Um, I haave to, um, go...." Our hero said before the two guards lunged at him, tackleing him to the ground.

"Not so fast!" the first guard said, with a lustful tone. "Do you know how many mares this job gets? not many!" the first guard said with an almost sadistic laugh.

"Wait! What are you doing!?" Our hero yelled as the first guard held him down and the second guard trotted around twards the heros baclside.

"Are you just stupid? Or Naive/" the second guard said as he leanded down twards our Hero's virgin anus.

"Ahhhh, smells beutiful!" The second guard said. He then leaned down and gave the hero's rectum a long, sloppy lick. "Mmmmm, tastes great to!" the second guard said as he spit onto Hero's anus,

Hero winced, never in his shrt life had he expected to feel something so degrading and dirty as moist saliva of the lesser race upon his virgin butttox. He tried to muster up streantgfh, but lost it all when he felt a large, forgen object infiltrate his anus.

Hero wimpered in agony as his ass was being pounded by a pissed off pegusis, unable to do anything but sit here, feeling dirty.

Hero let his head fall down as his ass contineued to get pummeld and saw a horrifying sight, the first guard had grown erect from watching his partner violate the Hero's tight ass crack. and took one hoof away from Hero's body, and moved it twards his mouth.

Hero screamed as, one by one, his teeth were knocked from his skull, the blood flowing freely. After this was compleate he felt the first guards member push into his bloody, lubricated mouth hole, and begin to slide back and forth.

This truly was a pitiful sight, the savior of Equestria, being gang-raped by pegusi. Hero was aware of how pitiful this was and began to cry as the guards thrusting became faster, and more violent and soon found themselves spurting a large volume of salty man-seed from their lustful dicks.

While he felt his anus become filled and also felt (and tasted) his mouth fill as well and heard the first guard go

"Good, now be a good little filly and swallow for your daddy!" with a laugh.

Hero couldn't talk, he was to broken and he noded and obediantly swallod, feeliing the warm, gooey seed fill his stomach.

after he did this the two guards looked down at the broken hero, laughed and silently pushed his broken form over the edge.

Hero had failed. His one purpose and mission was a faliure. He let his cum leaking body fall, and fall, untill he felt something impact him, and then darkness.

Theirs my ending. Anyone else want to share theirs?

CrimsonEquine