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That's racist.
1594211 What do you mean thats racist!?
I saw
Then
And immediately knew where this was going to go.
1594260 I mean that it discriminates against a certain color or creed, or in this case, equine species. What did you think I meant by racist?
1594324 Whatever floats your boat bro.
what is this i do not even
Sorry, this is bad. I mean, the writing is bad, the humor is kind of... whatever, and the rhymes are beyond beyond.
How. Ever.
Do not stop writing. Do not stop writing comedy. Do not stop rhyming, because! Things can only get better from here. I never thumbs down a story as a rule, so here's what I'll do: I'm going to thumbs up and follow on a random whim, and you are going to keep writing. Done.
Oh, and do find some proofreaders. Much obliged.