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CrimsonEquine


Improvement is a dire mistress.

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Now this..this..is good.
DEATH IS MY FRIEND!!! although his parties arent that great..kinda feels like everyone is dead..

I met with death

Raven: ........... Sounds legit.

Dr. X: Indeed........ Though I must confess, the way the Grim Reaper spoke was not a way that a being such as him would. For instance, he would not say something such as "It was nice hanging with you. See ya soon". That sounds quite modern. He would speak in a very old fashioned and ancient manner, if not in old English, such as "Thee" and "Thou" and the sort.

Raven: Eeeyup. At any case, you now see why you should never prank people. I just hate pranks..... Doesn't matter whether it's people who can take it or not. There's still a chance something like this happens.

You should have capitalized Death' dialogue.:-D

Fluttershy's Freindship has no bounds....God Of Chaos.....Death....What's next? The Greek Gods????? :trixieshiftright:

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ZEUS: You can't RUN from Heaven!

Ho hooooooo boy, dis gun b gud!! :pinkiehappy:

TGM

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Well you gotta realize, he's an ancient being endowed with the task of seeing people (and ponies) into the next life. He's probably seen so much in that time that talking as he normally would would confuse the grand hell out of us, so he had to use terms Fluttershy could understand.

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No Fluttershy CAN if she made friends with Death...Hades won't be far :trollestia:

3183844 I know.... His parties have absolutely no life in them. :trollestia:

see you soon.

how soon?

don't start reading any long books.

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Dr. X: Yes, but the manner I am using is something understandable, correct?

Raven: His main point is just talk like he is. Kinda sophisticated, to say the least.

Should have been a one shot to be honest.

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Funny you said that, Because it was actually a one-shot before! Then I decided that I would add just one more chapter since there was still some ideas in my head.

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I can not allow you to keep this as a one shot unless you tell what the third card meant. That is all that is needed for the story to feel complete.

That was chill as shit

Anyone else remember the comic?

It went EXACTLY like this...

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I forget the name... I will look it up again, but what was scary is that it was Rainbow in a black dragon mask too...

This version of Death reminded me of the one from Discworld.

Nice shot story.

3184734 Hey umm dude, when is the next chapter out on Sirraf the Redmage in Equestria?

Jumping around between other user's libraries I found one of your stories. Can't say liked it, yet I didn't hate it. So, curious I decided to look around your stories to see what else was there...

Then I found this little thing. Great job.

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