The Creation

Deep in the Everfree forest, the forest of mystery and darkness, where animals and creatures of unknown origin lay. In the heart of the forest there was a mare that had purple skin and a wild black mane. In her current position she lay next to a tree that had many apples strewn across its branches and sharp edges on the trunk. With one stroke of her hoof upon the tree she cut herself and bled drips of blood onto the forest floor. With a psychic thought from the mare, the blood began to move and expand. The blood morphed into legs and continued to expand into organs whilst then becoming a full fledged pegasus right before her eyes. The pegasus was black with an orange mane and purple streaks across it, he was strongly built but not massive and was crouching on the ground before the mare.

"Rise! rise to carry out your meaning." screamed the mare.

The stallion opened his eyes and stood upright from the floor. His eyes were blank white, but then slowly irises appeared from the blank sockets. The irises were emerald green and his stare became erratic and confused. He looked around at where he was and then looked at the mare before him, then he screamed. He jumped back from the mare and was moving about in random directions until he stopped out of exhaustion. The mare just stared and waited until he calmed himself.

"Are you done?"

"Who... Who are you? Where am I? What am I? Whats going on? What am I doing? What is all this? Why? Why?"

"Look into your senses, you are here for a reason."

The stallion stood up from the ground and became stable as he realized his meaning. He bowed to the mare crossing his legs and lowering his head. The mare smiled for she had not seen a curtsy from anypony for a long time.

"I know what must be done."

"Good, you are of my flesh and so you must do as I say, correct?"

"Yes... mother?"

"No do not call me that, you were born from the flesh so we are the same."

"What do I call you?"

"Call me Master."

"Okay Master, what shall I do first?"

"Take this weapon, it will be all you need, as for the destination you will know were to go." said the mare as she levitated a sapphire sword towards him. The stallion bit on the sword closing his eyes in the process, when he opened them the mare disappeared. The stallion bewildered by this shook his head dropped the weapon and screamed "Wait whats my name!?" but there was not a sound in return. He looked around the Everfree forest and saw the apple tree that the mare was next to.

Gurgle gurgle

"Master is that you?" said the pegasus as he looked around for the origin of the sound.

Gurgle gurgle

"Ah, its coming from... here!"

The Stallion moved his head under his front legs to see his stomach moving, he could not understand what it meant.

"What could this be?" said the pegasus as he examined his stomach.

Then he looked around for a solution. It seemed that every time he looked at the apple tree his stomach growled so he guessed to solve this was to get the apple from the tree, but how?

"If only I could get up there... wait I have wings!"

The stallion then began to flap his wings expertly going up fast, way to fast.

"Woooooo!" screamed the pegasus as he flew high into the sky.

The pegasus then began to fly around the air laughing and giggling through the empty space that is the sky. He continued to do this until his stomach growled again.

Gurgle gurgle

"Um right.."

The pegasus flew down into the same place where he was born and grabbed an apple from the tree before he landed. He then stared into the red apple continuously until he grunted in aggravation and threw the apple at the apple tree. The apple tree started to shake and more apples fell from the tree landing all over the pegasus. He stood up from the apple attack and found an apple stuck in his mouth. With an instinct an a little force, the teeth that were already stuck in the apple forced its way through the core. He then began to chew the food whilst his eyes agape in surprise at the experience. After enjoying the apple in an almost orgasmic way, he then started to eat it furiously. Then he started to eat all the other apples out of control until he felt something bad in his stomach.

Ahh, what the good feeling is gone now...

The stallion lay there on the floor tired and exhausted, he closed his eyes and went to sleep.

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The stallion woke up to the smell of blood and steam, he looked around and saw many machines creating what seems to be rainbows. He turned his head and saw right next to him many ponies strewn across the assembly floor tied into metal pedestals . He then saw himself get picked up from the ground and lifted up towards a huge knife on the assembly line. Then the knife cut him as he screamed in horror at the moment.

"Ah!" screamed The stallion as he woke up from his dream. The stallion stood from the earth and breathed heavily from the nightmare and shook himself. Then he stared a horrible stare at the apple tree realizing the horrors that he experienced in that dream.

"I know what must be done." He said to himself.

The stallion grabbed his sapphire sword and began to fly into the sky in super fast speeds. He continued to fly putting a strain on his wings. Yet, he could handle it for he had the power. He then arrived at Cloudsdale, he began to examine the layout of the area until he found the Cloudsdale Rainbow Factory. Two ponies flew up and greeted the unknown equine.

"Who are you? what is your identification?" questioned the two pegasi.

The End.

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zel

zel #1 · Nov 5th, 2012 · · ·

The ending...
Oh my god, so touching.

CrimsonEquine

CrimsonEquine #2 · Nov 5th, 2012 · · ·

1569012 Quite!

Twifight Sparkill

Twifight Sparkill #3 · Nov 6th, 2012 · · ·

I neatly curled up into a tiny ball and wept. The vastness of the world you painted left me breathless and wanting - I was a mixture of awestruck and alarmed, wishing I could somehow help in this crushing, awful injustice your protagonist suffered through.

There may not be enough tears left me now, my eyes left reddened and pained. Indeed, there is nothing more satisfying than an epic conflict of this magnitude.

Truly, we are blessed.

Brutalassmaster

Brutalassmaster #4 · Nov 7th, 2012 · · ·

I take it it's one of those stories that lets you decide the ending? Well here's mine.

"Who are you? what is your identification?" questioned the two pegasi. The warrior solomnly raised his sword and brought it down unto one of the pegusi's head, only to look in horror as he missed, logding his blade into the cloud wall, leaving it stuck as the two infuriated pegusi guards advanced twoards him.

"Um, I haave to, um, go...." Our hero said before the two guards lunged at him, tackleing him to the ground.

"Not so fast!" the first guard said, with a lustful tone. "Do you know how many mares this job gets? not many!" the first guard said with an almost sadistic laugh.

"Wait! What are you doing!?" Our hero yelled as the first guard held him down and the second guard trotted around twards the heros baclside.

"Are you just stupid? Or Naive/" the second guard said as he leanded down twards our Hero's virgin anus.

"Ahhhh, smells beutiful!" The second guard said. He then leaned down and gave the hero's rectum a long, sloppy lick. "Mmmmm, tastes great to!" the second guard said as he spit onto Hero's anus,

Hero winced, never in his shrt life had he expected to feel something so degrading and dirty as moist saliva of the lesser race upon his virgin butttox. He tried to muster up streantgfh, but lost it all when he felt a large, forgen object infiltrate his anus.

Hero wimpered in agony as his ass was being pounded by a pissed off pegusis, unable to do anything but sit here, feeling dirty.

Hero let his head fall down as his ass contineued to get pummeld and saw a horrifying sight, the first guard had grown erect from watching his partner violate the Hero's tight ass crack. and took one hoof away from Hero's body, and moved it twards his mouth.

Hero screamed as, one by one, his teeth were knocked from his skull, the blood flowing freely. After this was compleate he felt the first guards member push into his bloody, lubricated mouth hole, and begin to slide back and forth.

This truly was a pitiful sight, the savior of Equestria, being gang-raped by pegusi. Hero was aware of how pitiful this was and began to cry as the guards thrusting became faster, and more violent and soon found themselves spurting a large volume of salty man-seed from their lustful dicks.

While he felt his anus become filled and also felt (and tasted) his mouth fill as well and heard the first guard go

"Good, now be a good little filly and swallow for your daddy!" with a laugh.

Hero couldn't talk, he was to broken and he noded and obediantly swallod, feeliing the warm, gooey seed fill his stomach.

after he did this the two guards looked down at the broken hero, laughed and silently pushed his broken form over the edge.

Hero had failed. His one purpose and mission was a faliure. He let his cum leaking body fall, and fall, untill he felt something impact him, and then darkness.

Theirs my ending. Anyone else want to share theirs?

CrimsonEquine