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[26/08/2013] darf: people like you make me fucking sick [26/08/2013] darf: i hope you become a paraplegic you shitcunt [left_insert][left_insert][left_insert][left_insert][left_insert][left_insert]

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Marcus was just another Brony who spends far to much time on the internet, he had few friends, and spent what little of his time not dedicated to ponies on Left 4 dead. After passing out late at night on the keyboard reading another cliche Human in Equestia fanfic, he awakes to find himself in a strange and colourful land... as a Draconequus....
Just what happens when you take a well-meaning looser
with mild psychopathic tendencies and give him phenomenal, god-like cosmic power, and let him loose in Equestria to run around blindly without any clue whats going on.
Having far to much power for his own good, Will he manage to restrain from accidently killing himself, let alone anything he encounters. Will he will learn that with great power comes great responsibility? Unlikely.


This is a rewrite of an old, discontinued fic of mine posted some 21 weeks ago, it was pretty crap (and still is) to be honest so I though I'd try my hand at rewriting it. I would just edit the old one but It's deleted.

There was going to be copious gore in later chapters, but this new story-line will be allot lighter then the previous extreme Grimdark horror-fest I had planned out, and will probably continue the lighthearted path it was on. There will still probably be gore, just not as extreme.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 27 )

I'm fairly sure this will be submitted to train-wreck explorers. Chapters 1-6 are all half-assed and terrible. Heads up.

Hmm. I'm indifferent to this one. It didn't do anything to offend me, like fucking Rainbow Dash by the end of the first chapter, which happens a lot in these kinds of stories, but it runs into the same problem that all these kinds of HiE fics have, namely that the plot just meanders around without really going anywhere. I doubt the train-wreckers will have any interest in this, though, since it's not horrifically bad.

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Shall I go back to that Pinkie pie story then (which took two months to write what should have taken 1 hour)? As always your review was appreciated.

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I'm afraid I'm not familiar with the Pinkie Pie one you're talking about. I only see one story on your account for some reason. I'd like to read it If i could find it, though. DWK goes for flat out sadism, Fiddle creates fine literature that is incredibly deep and complex, and I start serious or semi-serious before taking a left turn into batshit insanity. I'm kind of curious to see what your style is like.

zel

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And I write nothing~!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applebloom_lolface.png
But I have to admit, the pinkie pie story is pure epicness.
EDIT:Here it is! password might be "shit"

1243259 I have to agre that it is, well, too HiE. :trollestia: dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png



Just wait you fuckers until I finally write story.

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I think mark is everything you hate in a character.

Yea I'll get round to that. What they do to scootaloo will make a fun day look pretty tame. No joke.

zel

You know... You need prereader.:trollestia:

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I know, I only ever posted this crap because it got 57 likes to 3 dislikes last time...

Itty bitty living space.

Man, what could go wrong here?

dude i love this keep saying this is half assed and i want to see your real work cause this is good.

-wargod

it extened halfway down his whiplick tain

Pretty sure you meant whiplike tail.

Side note, great to see this is getting a soon to be awesome rewrite.

Fluttershy Stared at the packages

Stared shouldn't be capitalized

She had too choices

Two, not too.

"Oh, One moment Angel"

One should be lower case.

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I'll get right to it when I finish this trollfic I haven't started yet.

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Sorry, on top of being horrifically lazy (which is so far the cause behind the lack of updates), I must finish my troll fic because my friend drew cover art, and therefore that takes first priority.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/40721/Chocolate-Frosting.

Read at your own risk, the bad stuff happens in "chapter 2: shit gets real"

1256026 Wow, theres fan fics where they fuck RD by chapter 1 end? Wow, even I waited till chapter 3. (And she raped him damnit!)

1653672 I don't drink, but my mind is so full of fuck, I have a constant drunk state.

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hmmm.... I can relate. In any case get out of my story and go be disorderly elsewhere.

Leave him alone I remember reading this fic a year ago I think its pretty funny.

Now that I think about it this ponies say Buck instead of Fuck. So do they even know what Fuck was since its a childrens cartoon

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