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Game-BeatX14


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This sounds right up my ally.

8877948 Well, it’s good to know I’m reaching my target audience so quickly. Hope you enjoy it. :raritywink:

I liked it except for the aphrodisiacs. Everyone was being sure to explain everything to Thunderlane and Sparky even asked for consent but then she used something that impairs his decision making without his permission. Just a little nitpick.

This was a good read, keep it up.

8878676 Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

8878561 A fair point; I could have worked that into the story more carefully since despite the rough nature it was still intended to be consensual. I’ll keep that in mind for future writing.

What would happen if a Hyper-Hybrid Stallion fills his marefriend with what she dreams for a long time?

I can't help but think that you've used the same idea from a porn game.
I vaguely remember the game, but it did have a female robot that kinda did the same exact thing from it.

10/10 though. :moustache:

8879562 I’ve never heard of that game, but now I’m intrigued... :rainbowhuh:

8879527 Dunno, that sounds like the opposite of what I just wrote. But she would probably like it. :ajsmug:

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Except no limitations on excessive creampies.

Mmm, I adored this story <3 would love a follow-up where she is equipped with more advanced aphrodisiacs that increase her target's production so she can milk even more orgasms out of them. Some electricity would be nice too, with a name like 'Sparky' I was slightly disappointed she didn't employ any electrical stimulation~

Wow great story. I would put it in your top three.

Im curious though, are you planning for a sequel between Thunderlane and Starlight. I would be interested in listening to that. It would also be interesting to see how Big Mac handles Sparky

The Monk

Well, she should have no problem relieving even the strongest sex drives with ease. Stallions, dragons, you name it!

:moustache:: "Can you make one with Rarity's personality?"
:duck:: "You think such a thing can replace me?!"
*graps Spike in her magic*
:raritywink:: "We'll go to my bedroom and I'll show you something no machine can ever hope to archive."
:moustache:: "I'm okay with that."

"Sooo, are you going to build one for mares too? Chances are we’ll need our own version after the stallions are all preoccupied getting laid by perfect sex robots instead of us.” She pointed out.
Twilight sighed. She hadn’t really thought about that.

She has a point. (And an possible lead for an sequel.)

“This is great. For once I can actually say watching two ponies have sex is for research purposes..."

Starlight: "So, usually you are watching them without?"
:twilightblush:: "Eeep."

"It’s not my job to follow your preferences, Thunderlane. My script shows that maximum sperm extraction will be achieved with me in the dominant position. On top. Cowgirl style. Whatever you want to call it." She shrugged.

Thunderlane: "Is it possible to reprogram that part?"

“Yep. So I need you to give me more, until you’re completely relieved. All of it.”

Thunderlane: *shudders excitedly*

“So tell me then… Would you feel more comfortable doing that with a real mare? I mean, the whole submission and multiple orgasm thing…” She flicked her tail against his side.

:rainbowderp::rainbowderp::rainbowderp:

Good story!
Remembers me of another good story I had read.

Edit:
Wait, I just saw it was written by you, too?!

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Well, that explains a few things; for example, why Twilight knows Thunderlane is an very verile stallion...

I'm really curious what Twilight my invent next. (And by whom/how it will be used...)

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Honestly, electrical stimulation isn’t one of my fetishes. It’s hard to write about something without any experience or understanding of what makes it feel good so that’s why it wasn’t included. But dang, it really does seem like a missed opportunity now that you put it that way... :rainbowderp:

8894901 I don’t have a plan for a sequel at the moment, but wanted to leave it open as a possibility if the inspiration strikes. Listing in my top three stories is quite the compliment, considering I’ve written thirty stories now. Thank you. :pinkiehappy:

8899176 Lol, I enjoyed your commentary. :rainbowlaugh: But it’s awesome that you actually remember Pegasus Milking; that fic is three and half years old now. Guess I just couldn’t resist writing another story about poor Thunderlane getting milked senseless. :raritywink:

8899311
Ah, fair enough! Definitely don't force yourself to write a fetish you have no experience with :) I would however suggest *getting* some experience with it, because it is *awesome* <3

Guess I just couldn’t resist writing another story about poor Thunderlane getting milked senseless. :raritywink:

Well, there is nothing wrong with that!

Will you be making a sequel?

A year and some change later and I finally got around to reading this. I quite enjoyed it.

V8

9858172
and the name of the prototype is called the "Devel Sixteen Prototype"

Kinda cute but very oddly paced and kinda pulls too much from hentai.

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