Pegasus Milking

MFuta Rarity Milks Herself
MLP: FiM
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After her success with hooking Thunderlane up to a special milking pump, Rarity wishes to experience the sensation of the machine for herself. Fortunately for her, all it requires is a simple body modification spell to get started.
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Game-BeatX14 · 2.3k words · 377 27 · 23k views

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SapphireSparks

SapphireSparks #1 · Nov 11th, 2014 · 8 · 2 ·

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-Just A Fabulous Cat

Flutterfan69

Flutterfan69 #2 · Nov 11th, 2014 · 2 · 1 ·

Great story coupled with near mind break. Nice.

One error I thought you should know about though

"Mmm hmmmm." She shook her head lightly. "And do you know what am I going to do with it?"

Just change that to "She nodded her head", so its not confusing to readers.

Game-BeatX14

Game-BeatX14 #3 · Nov 11th, 2014 · · ·

5257957 Thank you for pointing that out, it's fixed now. Ironically, there was another error in that same sentence where "I" and "Am" were switched. Lol xD

Glad you liked the story

Double Entendre

Double Entendre #4 · Nov 11th, 2014 · 6 · 2 ·

Forced orgasm being one of my favorite fetishes, I of course had to give this a read.

Glad I did. Grammatically-solid, good descriptions - and the thought of Thunderlane being reduced to a drooling sack of fur as he's milked unceasingly, of course - earns a definite fave and watch. :D

Also, uh. If Rarity is looking for more test subjects, I er. Might be willing to volunteer. o///o;

Game-BeatX14

Game-BeatX14 #5 · Nov 12th, 2014 · · ·

5258209 I'm sure she would be happy to have a human volunteer

Thanks, I really appreciate the comment. It's uplifting to see that my writing was effective; I spent quite a while today editing this.

RandomHamster33

RandomHamster33 #6 · Nov 12th, 2014 · 2 · 1 ·

I . . . I have no words . . .

But thank you. Thank you so much.

Game-BeatX14

Game-BeatX14 #7 · Nov 12th, 2014 · 2 · ·

5259147 So I'm guessing I hit you right in the fetish?

You're welcome

OmniFox

OmniFox #8 · Nov 12th, 2014 · · ·

That was one freaky fetish fanfic.

HumanFlea

HumanFlea #9 · Nov 12th, 2014 · 1 · ·

There needs to be more machine sex stories on this site.

Game-BeatX14

Game-BeatX14 #10 · Nov 12th, 2014 · · ·

5261109 I agree with you so much. That was actually one of my motivations behind writing this.

steven1212121212

steven1212121212 #11 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

This is probably my first forced orgasm clopfic, and I love it. I wonder who her next subject will be?

Wise Cracker

Wise Cracker #12 · Nov 13th, 2014 · · ·

Short and sweet. Not a lot of character, but good use of the characters portrayed, at least. As far as hot clops go, it's good, and it has the occasional one-liner to make it stand out. Twilight's book money got a chuckle out of me ;3

CrayCraytheCrayfish

CrayCraytheCrayfish #13 · Nov 13th, 2014 · 5 · 4 ·

Forced orgasm is degrading and humiliating! Reading how Thunderlane is basically raped by Rarity using a milking machine is just downright cruel and unusual. Not to mention the fact that she does it to a point where Thunderlane is left to nothing but a pile of shame and exhaustion. You sir, have may as well severely damaged the reputation of well developed characters in the fandom.

P.S. => MAKE MOAR

Blatant Chaos

Blatant Chaos #14 · Nov 13th, 2014 · 8 · ·

I'd love an AU story were Thunderlane escapes and presses charges.

Foaly_reviews

Foaly_reviews #15 · Nov 15th, 2014 · 2 · ·

This was short but had a smooth and fluid feel to the text and seemed to just flow(no pun intended)
have to say for a story under 6 thousand words it had a good chunk information in it to help keep this from just being a clop for the sake of clop story well done

7/10

Game-BeatX14