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I never imagined just how useful an vacuum could be...
: "Yeah, I better hurry and get one of those devices..."
: "Ooops, I didn't say that out loud, did I?"
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
After reading the short description in the New-Stories-List I was immediately reminded of an certain author who likes to involve vacuum cleaners.
And now guess which autor wrote this story...
Found an timeline error:
You mentioned a few times Twilight is an unicorn, but you also mentioned her experience with Tirek, which only happened after she became an alicorn.
You can add that alicorns struggle even worse with magical buildup than normal unicorns.
Nice; not quite as good as you breast draining stories, but nice, none the less. I think part of what made me like it was the non-consent on Twilight's end with her accidently sucking her own magic out.
9851061 Yep, vacuums can have all sorts of uses if you’re bold enough to try.
Thanks for pointing out the inconsistency. I made some minor tweaks to make it more clear that she is an alicorn in this story.
9851079 Thank you. Poor Twilight, a little accident can certainly alter the situation. And to think it could have been a nice time if she were more careful!
But when they opened up the canister, it was empty!
One of Spike's secret guilty pleasures, aided by his dragon physiology, love of cleaning, and just general weirdness, is that he likes drinking the vacuum water after washing the castle's halls. Now he's the princess of friendship.
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As an side effect Spike grew wings.
I mean, exposure to alicorn magic was how Twilight got hers.
(Hopefully Starlight doesn't make that connection...)
9852035 9852088 Haha, I love these ideas. Now Spike and Starlight have ALL THE POWER!
This is definitely one of my fetishes, thank you for this story, I wish people wrote more stuff like this.
9852868 Me too. I’m kinda surprised at how rare it is.
If you’re interested, I wrote another story back in 2015 with a similar magic extraction theme. It’s much darker and more sexual though.
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That’s an interesting twist to the story, but it seems like he was deriving pleasure from the sex rather than it coming from the submission of his magic, which is what I’m looking for.
9854821 Ah, I see. That’s very specific, but I can totally understand the difference in appeal. Sorry it’s not what you were looking for.
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It’s ok, thank you for trying to help me out, I appreciate it.
I am intensely curious to know what could have happened if Starlight hadn't found her
If Twilight really had a problem with her magic building up to uncomfortable levels, why not just fire a magic beam of energy toward the sky until her magic is relieved enough?
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People do stupid things when they can't think clearly enough to recognize obvious solutions.