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What can make a girl's legs look adorable better than a pair of striped socks? Twilight spent long nights deducing formulas and studying the history of women's hosiery, trying in vain to find a competent rival for such a wonderful piece of clothing. But as she proceeded with her studies, she came to a terminal conclusion that striped socks were cuter than any of their counterparts by far.

In theory.

But scientific method, besides theory, consisted of practice. Now the issue was finding an appropriate lab rat. A great and powerful lab rat, preferably.

Besides, Twilight was sure the said great and powerful lab rat would look cute in striped socks.

The story has sensual scenes. Tagged Sex just to be safe. Be warned!


Cover art is done by racoonkun.

Please rate and comment my story, as it will help me and encourage to write more. Constructive criticism is welcome <3

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Comments ( 12 )

Egg headed Succubus.

Practice safe clopping. Always were socks.

This can be taken into one of those rare-by-now Twixie clopfics.

Sexy and teasing. :)

8762496

Thank you so much! Hope to please you with my works in future as well ^^

8762048
This is now one of my favorite comments I've seen on FiMfiction <3

Very cute. If you've seen the most recent special, "Forgotten Friendship", Trixie does have her moments when she isn't obsessively speaking about herself in the third person, so that can be toned down a bit, but otherwise very nice. It begs for a naughty sequel which I hope will materialize in the future :twilightblush:

8866492

Thank you very much! <3

On that Trixie thing, I have just been thinking that Trixie would keep very official and cold with her (nominal) sworn rival and keep talking in third person to soothe her ego and remind Twi she's the great Trixie. Also I kinda think that sounds cute ^^

Thanks for pointing that out though.

I am not really sure about a naughty sequel. My brain kinda has a tough time processing what happens to them next.

Probably sex.

Trixie's dialog felt a little awkward. Mostly, a bit too lengthy and not having much emotional impact. Other than that, an interesting short gag.

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I shall improve it in future stories! Technically speaking, I do not imagine how I am going to improve yet, but I'll do my best, thanks for your opinion!

I enjoyed reading this very much, but it seemed a little rushed and too short. It would have been nice to have seen it drawn out a bit longer, maybe having Trixie's defences worn down as Twilight teased her, rather than the quick short session we got above.

That being said, It would be great to see a continuation.

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