Based several months after the events in Doorway to Another Place. The now permanently human Twilight Sparkle and Rick are planning their life together on Earth while Discord in Trixie's body is getting ready to spread his influence over Equestria once again.
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Yay, a sequel!
Just finished the prequel to this. I'm excited to sit down tomorrow and give it a good read between working on my own stories. Loved the last story!
awesome
Cool! Sequel time!
Seems a little bit rushed, to be honest
Annnnnddddd I'm all caught up!
just read the prequel to this and finished reading this chapter.
Great story too Loving it so far
Thanks for all the kind words so far. I'll admit this one is taking a lot more effort to write than the last one. But I've got some time off work coming soon so there's more chances to work in it. Hopefully people will enjoy it as much as the last story.
Well this is getting interesting. I like it keep it up!
>>Gyvon right now it doesn't matter it's just leading up to the main plot. But anyways this is a good start. Great work
Java Joe you are an awesome author I personally think that discord is the best villain and I like the thought that Twilight is still some how connected to her home world. How is that possible that she is having visions just like to know.
More!!!
Ve~ more
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Simple answer: Plot device.
Actually the idea was to indicate that Twilight still had a connection to Equestria and through that connection she was still able to find a way to get back.
Really testing the limits of the "teen" rating these past couple chapters.
You sir are a marvel.
I don't know how you write so much and so well.
5 mustaches so far:
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It's a little risque I'll admit but nothing really graphic.
That awkward moment when a princess watches you rut...
Twilight was in heat,wasn't she?
She is gonna end up pregnant,isn't she?
Zninja94 she wasn't in heat it was only the spell that Discord put on them that only made it seem like she was.
1047573 nope discord said she would act like she was in heat but in reality she isnt
more!
I wonder if in the end they will be free to go in and out of Equestria as they wish. Sadly, this is just wishful thinking from my part.
Let's see how this goes, shall we?
Wonder what Discord has planned for Rick..
Great chapter! Next one will be awesome! Now we play the waiting game...
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....the waiting game sucks.......
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Okay, let's play Hungry Hungry Hippos instead.
Do continue...
Still too Cool for School?
I leave for a few days and there's three chapters waiting.
Damn you! You're the enemy of getting things done.
P.S. Loved the "Luna Signal" idea.
If there is a sequel of this... get would love to see Twilight's foal
Nice chapter. I liked the parallels between the Greek myths and what was going on in the story.
I'm hoping this isn't the end. Eris is gone but there are still some loose ends to tie up or are we looking at a sequel?
Well. That certainly went too smooth for my taste.
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Oh ye of little faith.
We're just getting started.
I dont see why they dont just blast the statue to make sure he stays in longer
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You're just f*cking with us now aren't you?
I love your writing, but this sounds like it's moving into dark territory really soon.
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Kewl. That was exactly what I was going for.
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He's no longer in the statue. His body might be there, but his mind is free even if it is trapped for a while.
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I'm not farking with anybody, and it's not going to be as dark as you might think it's going to be.
Sorry guys, this one is really taking a long time to write. Updates might be a little slower but I do intend on finishing this.
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OH SNAP
9 months.... why do I have a bad feeling about this?
we can create a permanent portal between your world and this one.
I knew it!
Sorry, I just realized by previous comment here was on the wrong fic.
Oopsie.
1138914 9 months is the time a baby spends devoping in the woum. so i see a few possibilitys.
1. its just nine months and has nothing to do with reproduction
2.someone is goin give birth to discord
3. looks like not very possibillitys as i thought
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Problem is, equines have an 11 month gestation period.
1144424 *goes over to java joes house,breaks in it, ties him up, goes on to his computer, changes it to 11, goes off his computer, unties him, wipes his memory, and leaves*
nope where does does it say 9
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Dammit, what happened and why does my butt hurt?
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If I had to guess, it's not a birth thing. Joeyjoejoe seems to like misdirection. Say something in one way, then have it mean something else.
Or I could be overanalyzing.
Everything looks happy so far.
Why do I get the feeling something bad is happening next chapter?
I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT BEAT THAT PERSON WHO SAID IT IS 11 MONTHS FOR A PONYS BABY TIME IN STOMACH THING .
Discord has possessed Rick and Twilight's child, hasn't he? Judging by the last chapter my guess is at that.
sooo twilight is pragnent but she did drink alcohol sooo OMG thets not good
Good chapter I liked it