it's like this in a nutshell: Rainbow Dash tries to rob some apple cider, but it dosen't work well when she has Applejack and her family hunting her down.
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That was interesting, but now for the picking of nits:
She is in her kitchen with one of her friends Pinkie Pie
Only pegasi can walk on clouds, unless Twilight put that cloud-walking spell on her.
"I lied."
Applejack never lies. Ever.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Applejack.png
Those were the two main issues that bugged me, but aside from minor grammar or punctuation errors, this story was pretty funny.
A monster truck? Where do they even hide it? And...what did Pinkie and Big Mac do??
never mess with Applejack
whoa, whoa, whoa, stop right there buddy, so applejack lied?..... APPLEJACK NEVER LIES!!!!!!
Okay that was kinda of funny but the usage of current tense just killed it for me.
Amusing, but too many tense changes, and it was a bit choppy at times.
Ok I know that some people are complaining about what applejack said in the ending. But hey, I thought it would be funny. I swear, I need a break from fanfiction for a while.
1. What did
& 
do?
2. "I lied." NO. NO! YOU BROKE THE RULES! YOU BROKE THE #$^% RULES!
3. Red Bull really does gives you wings.
1032386 1. do you really want to know?
2. I thought it would be funny
3. true story
1036770 1.
2. Hmm. I'll let you off the hook this time.
3.
Big Mac?! Leaving your post to fool around with your marefriend? You
go, dude!should be ashamed of yourself!CUTIE MARK CRUSADER SECURITY DEVICES YAAAAAAY!!
Yes, I too would be shocked at hearing that cider theft is a capital crime.
I mean, either that, or Apple Bloom completely misunderstands the implications behind a "final request".
I'm sure that's true, but what else would Equestrian cars be made for? It wouldn't occur to a pony that a car might not be made for their use unless some other species invents and produces the cars.
... And in any case, I think it should come as more of a surprise that Applejack OWNS a monster truck.
The resolution and ending was... meh. Although I'm amused that Equestrian energy drinks offer an easy method for changing pony species. To think, every unicorn is one Red Bull away from being royalty!