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It's Spa Day, and Tempest Shadow has been invited!
It's not like she can't remember the last time she relaxed or anything.
Nope.
An entry into Aragon's "Comedy Is Serious Business" Contest. Check out the rest of the stories entered!
Edited by the glamorous Not Enough Coffee!
Pre-read by the amazing FamousLastWords and outstanding Wand3r3r3!
Any other mistakes, please PM me, so as not to clutter the comments section. Thank you for reading!~ 
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You're forgetting my other titles, such as 'great' and 'powerful'.
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Oh hush, you
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The title made me think of this meme:
https://m.I, think Tempest could benefit from therapy.
Noice!!!
Hey, that's me!
We're seeing a lot out of Tempest Shadow and more.
Q: What would happen if Spike did something out of the box?
I would have liked to see a little more exploration of Tempest’s feelings post meltdown. She builds up all these feelings to examine, and then it sort of ends without her sorting them out. But maybe that’s another story for another day?
Also I would’ve liked to have seen a stronger link back to the title.
So do I have an IQ over 300?
This paragraph confuses me a little. Is Tempes or is Tempest not the middle sibling? And is she envying Applejack or not? I don't really know.
The story itself, though with some little typos, was very good. I liked it, it was very heartfelt. But funny? Sadly not...
Review here: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/797707/more-slightly-high-pony-reviews
Amazing. I'm getting plenty of ideas for my own fic.
I swear ponies don't understand the concept of friendship, tempest was obviously uncomfortable and was peer pressured Into going
Lacking in comedy, perhaps, but you did a really solid job with portraying Tempest's character, so it's hardly lacking as a story. :D
i liked the story because it showed something about tempest shadow aka fizzle-pop berry-twist. a side that is scared and emotional a side that she had hidden away so she wouldn't feel the pain of what happened. at least that is what i liked about it.
also i don't know if i should be insulted for needing an IQ of 300 to even understand this story but i'm feeling like i should be.
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It’s a joke
Also, thanks for liking the story! I can’t believe this is still getting attention honestly.
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you shouldn't be surprised it's a very good story and i read a lot.
Very cute!