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Doctor Disco


Fear makes strangers of us all.

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Starlight bargain's for Chrysalis' friendship!


In case you didn't already guess, this is a parody of the scene from Marvel's Doctor Strange: "Dormammu, I've come to bargain!"

Lol what. Thanks for the Feature! Featured 12/12/16 - 15/12/16

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And, the difference between 'parody' and 'carbon copy for the sake of a lazy cheap laugh' is...?

Okay, this got a smile out of me. I knew Chryssy would come around eventually. :p

Well done!

7788473 So, for future reference...

You're one of them folks who puts no effort into anything that they make publicly viewable, aren't you?

Uh, what did I just read here. This was the weirdest and most strangest story that I have EVER read. A+ for very strange and interesting hope to see another just like it soon. Maybe one where Celestia does this to Sunset Shimmer.

7788480 No, I am not one of those folks who put no effort into anything I make publicly viewable.

I just thought it would be fun to have a more ponified version of this particular scene. I mean, if I was pumping out carbon copies of pop culture I would've been found out by now. Plus, I probably wouldn't have as many followers. Adding to this list would have to be that I'm an idjit with no imagination whatsoever.

I'm probably not ripping my hair out right now trying to figure out a HiE I'm writing. You know.

Cause I'm unoriginal like that.

I love criticism!

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Maybe one where Celestia does this to Sunset Shimmer.

I'm... not sure how that would work...

Actually was pretty good. Good job!

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
1:52_12/12/2016

Pause #9 · Dec 12th, 2016 · · 1 ·

Time abIilites are so broken.

7788588 You can say that again-

You can say that again-

You can say that again-

You can-

That was beautiful! Are you going to continue in some manner the shennanigains they get up to in another story perhaps?

7788605 Sure, if you all really want.

It would be fun to explore that background, so I very well might!

CELESTIA DAMMIT MAN WHAT DID STARLIGHT SEE THAT MADE HER DIE ON SIGHT OF IT.,., (pm me that..I'm curious)

Dormamu, I've come to bargain. Dormamu, I've come to bargain. Dormamu, I've come to bargain. Dormamu, I've come to bargain. Dormamu, I've come to bargain. Dormamu, I've come to bargain. Dormamu, I've come to bargain. Dormamu, I've come to bargain. Dormamu, I've come to bargain. Dormamu, I've come to bargain.

That's it Starlight! No more Marvel movies for you! :rainbowlaugh:

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Hehehe... this was pretty funny.

A little obvious, but still funny. I think it would be quite in-character for Starlight to attempt this tactic.

One minor criticism though, some of her deaths are described in the present tense, but the story is mostly in past tense, so they should be as well.

7789023 Thanks for the comment and the edit! I'll fix it when I have time :twilightsmile:

How many seconds in eternity?

This got a good chuckle out of me. Good job. :pinkiesmile:

I assume the loop is linked to Starlight's death so couldn't Chrysalis could just contain Starlight, then it wouldn't loop.

I loved this scene.
I love this story.
Absolute gold. You have made me laugh and smile. Keep up the good work!
-GM, master of flaming batons.

I was kinda expecting Dr. Strange to make a brief appearance.

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To be honest, I've felt that for Chrysalis it would be more in character to shake hooves with Starlight, and then kill her once again, this time forever.

Probably should be teen rated, but eh. This was quite amusing and silly.

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"Every hundred years, a little bird comes and sharpens it beak on a diamond mountain... And when the mountain is chiseled away, the first second of eternity will have passed..."

Must see pranking spree...

On the other hand, based on what we have seen from the two of them so far, Starlight could probably overwhelm Chrissy with raw power in this scenario. The only reason she didn't in the finale was that convenient only-changeling-magic stone. Since all of Chrissy's power is stolen, she'd be pretty weak if she's been hiding.

7789397 I want to see Chrysalis get punched. No magic. no spells or crap. I just want one pony, ANYPONY, canon or oc, to punch her right in the face. And make a sick bone-crunching sound effect as it happens.

Come on Hasbro! You tore off Rainbow Dash's wing and ripped part of her ear off in the timeline change episodes, you can do this!

I think the single biggest objection I have to this is that the only way this could even have a hope of working is if we assume that throughout all her trials and tribulations, Starlight Glimmer has learned nothing about friendship, and especially learned nothing about using magic as a shortcut to friendship.

7789348 "And when the world finally stops making fun of Justin Beiber and the Kardashians, five seconds of eternity will have passed."

It's funny because I saw the movie. Love it. Points for you.

Oh my god. :facehoof:

7788459 When someone like you isn't being a judgemental asshole.

7788503 with awkward porn. Again, and again, and again. Until they became to tired to argue anymore. Then some more porn. And then reformation. Easy, actually! :pinkiehappy:

“SWEET CELESTIA-!” She dies from sheer shock after seeing something I, the author, cannot describe lest this be rated teen or higher-

This really should be rated teen anyway for semi-vague descriptions of dozens of grisly demises.

Have to say, it was kinda fun, but this was almost a dead rip-off of Doctor Strange. You barely ponified it at all. You could put literally any two characters there and call it a fanfic. I guess what I'm saying is I wish you'd thought of more MLPish things like the Radioactive (I'm assuming) Rainbow Cupcakes.

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Lesson for the day kids

This 7788459 is reasonably calling someone out on something.

This 7788480 is just being a dick.

7789661 Actually, I'd argue they're both unreasonable levels of dickishness. The first just insults the story material instead of the author, which can easily fool people into believing it's a more reasonable statement and constitutes actual criticism.

What's particularly awful about the second comment is the fact that the commenter makes a snap judgment about the quality of the author's work, based on the commenter's negative opinion of the only two stories by the author that he's actually bothered to read. The sheer absurdity of such an assumption is such that it absorbs most of the negativity one feels towards the first comment, until the first comment actually seems reasonable by comparison.

I never want this to end!:pinkiehappy:

7789608 It's spelled 'judgmental'.

7789699 The point still stands jack ass.

7789704 Oh, I'm not disputing that. You're entirely correct in identifying me as a judgmental asshole. I just felt obliged to correct your spelling. It's the little things.

Nice icon, by the way. Very stylish.

7789710 ..... thanks.

7789714 You're very welcome. I hope you have a lovely day of making a positive impact on people's lives.

7789726 Mhm. Hope you have a good day of being a dick to people.

7789727 I was thinking of spending my day quietly reading stuff that I think I'll actually enjoy and keeping a wide berth from people who piss me off, but if you insist...

As a person who has done this exact same thing before but with a different hilarious scene, I approve of the ponification. :moustache:

Not that it means anything really.

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Guys guys guys. Now, I'm all about arguing viewpoints but this is absurd. Please try and not taint my comments section with a flame war.

Apart from that, have a good day!

Thank you.

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