How could you do this? And on Jueves?!
Scootaloo has a question for Rainbow Dash.
Rainbow Dash wishes she had a good answer for her.
Gold medalist in the Writeoff Association's January 2018 contest, written for the prompt "Lie Me A River." Cover art by Xieril, used without permission.
Edited by AndrewRogue.
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This line got all blorped up in-story.
8702457 I am unfamiliar with this word, "blorped."
(I did change the line, however)
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Shhh, we're all blorped in the end.
I really liked this. Short and sweet (in a blorped kind of way), but it conveyed a lot in its small package.
... Okay, so I primarily made this comment to use "Blorped" in a sentence, but it really was a nice little read and I wish I saw this kind of thing more often.
That was cute. I worry about Scootaloo, and that she might see through Rainbow's deception, but this was a nice moment. I expect both characters will have a lot of figuring out to do in the future, so it's a shame that we don't get to see it, but that's fine. Just a short little blorp in a larger, untold, story.
10/10, would blorp twice. Actually this is basically my second reading, so did blorp twice. Not even mad that you pulled the gold. This story manages to pack a lot into a very small package, which is one helluva trick.
For a brick, you flew pretty good.
- reference.
Nice story.
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Easier said that done for some people, my fren.
This was so sweet at the end
I liked this story