.....I don't get it, why was Spike so Angry? He should know that if she was the one to plan this she wouldn't have left in the first place! HELL! If she was going to betray him she wouldn't have stopped at just Rarity!
Spike got angry for no reason and it seems OOC for him in this story!
But it was his fault for Rarity getting Injured in the first place, He flew up to try and stop them, which Spooked them, which lead to the Bucket falling in a way that it hurt Rarity! so really he has no REASON to be pissed at the two Changelings OR Rachel!
It was a Harmless Prank that would have done very little long term damage had Spike not jumped the gun.
He got angry at himself but at the heat of the moment and rarity screaming at her he took it out at rach. I certainly been yelled at by people when I haven't done anything.
9214458 Think much worse. My guess is she’s going to contact those thugs again saying it’s back on and well, have them wait for her and probably do unspeakable things to her.
Oh, dear... this took a full-on 180-turn! Rarity and Rachel were really about to hit it off well, only for those two skanks of her roommates to derail it completely! Yeah... I don't think Rarity is going to be so forgiving this time around, albeit Rachel being a mere victim of circumstance. I hope she and Spike can reconcile, especially with how poorly Rarity has treated Spike over the years, he needs someone whom he can really trust. Let's hope Spike realizes it was all just a big misunderstanding!
Probably the best chapter so far; the one with the biggest twist! This story just keeps getting better and better!
“Why should I?!” Spike snapped. “Why should I be with someone who hurt the ones I love the most?!” The look at Spike's face...it made her fell to her knees. Tears in her eyes.
what?
This seems to be the main problem with this story. Don't get me wrong, I've enjoyed it, but the characters reactions to things are way over the top. Not to mention a little dipshitty. I mean for fuck's sake, he's interacted with the Twins enough to know that they're impulsive and go off doing things of their own accord. Why would he suddenly jump to such a conclusion?
9817540 ok, admittedly, when I wrote it, I was running out of ways to move on with a story. it was all I could think about. I did make Spike act like a dick. Thank you for the input and apologize for not responding to your comments. Commissions and irl stuff distracted me XD
Plz don’t let them break up they are now my waifu that I’m looking for😮😃😆
Great work
You literally gave me my early Birthday present! Thank you for the update :3
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Well, happy early birthday
Oh dear shits getting even more real now.
Okay, this is going pretty good so far-
>reaches the end
... This sh*t’s gonna have nuts in it!
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As always....
you sir, gives good comments XD double thumbs up for the Deadpool ref
I love this story and I ship spike and Rachel so much
Glad to see Rarity turned over a new Leaf. But Rube and Gem. Not cool.
.....I don't get it, why was Spike so Angry? He should know that if she was the one to plan this she wouldn't have left in the first place! HELL! If she was going to betray him she wouldn't have stopped at just Rarity!
Spike got angry for no reason and it seems OOC for him in this story!
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He just saw rarity his friend got hurt. He's angry and since the twins left before he did anything... He took it out on Rachel...
And regrets doing so
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But it was his fault for Rarity getting Injured in the first place, He flew up to try and stop them, which Spooked them, which lead to the Bucket falling in a way that it hurt Rarity! so really he has no REASON to be pissed at the two Changelings OR Rachel!
It was a Harmless Prank that would have done very little long term damage had Spike not jumped the gun.
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You have a point.
He got angry at himself but at the heat of the moment and rarity screaming at her he took it out at rach. I certainly been yelled at by people when I haven't done anything.
Is Rarity gonna kill Rachel for what the twins has done to her
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Think much worse. My guess is she’s going to contact those thugs again saying it’s back on and well, have them wait for her and probably do unspeakable things to her.
Oh, dear... this took a full-on 180-turn! Rarity and Rachel were really about to hit it off well, only for those two skanks of her roommates to derail it completely! Yeah... I don't think Rarity is going to be so forgiving this time around, albeit Rachel being a mere victim of circumstance. I hope she and Spike can reconcile, especially with how poorly Rarity has treated Spike over the years, he needs someone whom he can really trust. Let's hope Spike realizes it was all just a big misunderstanding!
Probably the best chapter so far; the one with the biggest twist! This story just keeps getting better and better!
what?
This seems to be the main problem with this story. Don't get me wrong, I've enjoyed it, but the characters reactions to things are way over the top. Not to mention a little dipshitty. I mean for fuck's sake, he's interacted with the Twins enough to know that they're impulsive and go off doing things of their own accord. Why would he suddenly jump to such a conclusion?
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ok, admittedly, when I wrote it, I was running out of ways to move on with a story. it was all I could think about. I did make Spike act like a dick. Thank you for the input and apologize for not responding to your comments. Commissions and irl stuff distracted me XD
This story definitely has the characters being led around by the plot. That was ridiculously contrived, Anon-a-Miss levels of contrived.