Let me just say that I love this story! First off, I didn't like the way Rarity spoke to Spike after he proposed to her, and now she gets jealous of a human being that won Spikes heart after she broke it by refusing to marry him. Plus, she brought up Rachel's past about murdering her unborn child, and I don't blame Spike for being mad. Rarity's gotta learn to leave Spike alone before she makes things worse than ever, which it probably already has. I see Spike and Rachel being a great couple in this story, but I think Rarity will cross a line that will be a point of no return. Either way, great job on this story! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up.
Hahahahaha Nice. Don't be mean to Luna Spike. She is best princess.
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I agree Luna is beat princess I just made her into a troll
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Oh I loved that part. It was so funny. This is a good story.
God I'm so tired of fillers...
Let me just say that I love this story! First off, I didn't like the way Rarity spoke to Spike after he proposed to her, and now she gets jealous of a human being that won Spikes heart after she broke it by refusing to marry him. Plus, she brought up Rachel's past about murdering her unborn child, and I don't blame Spike for being mad. Rarity's gotta learn to leave Spike alone before she makes things worse than ever, which it probably already has. I see Spike and Rachel being a great couple in this story, but I think Rarity will cross a line that will be a point of no return. Either way, great job on this story! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up.
Wow, excellent dream sequence! Luna's quite the Trol-Luna, isn't she?
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...Yeah, that was terrible.
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SHould say Tro-na lol
Why does everyone other than the two protagonists in this story have to be so mean and hateful?
That was disgusting, not so much breaking in on his dream when he wasn't having a nightmare, but not helping when he was. She has one job!