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DwarvishPony


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Pinkie and the girls make plans to go to the mall and everyone cancels.

Everyone but Sunset, of course.

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This story is so cute. I enjoyed it

Gods that was adorable.

I don’t know why but I always love shy/embarrassed
Pinkie

Your continued efforts to fill the SunPie-shaped hole that exists are soundly appreciated.

"I know what you did to those nacho fries, Pinkie."

This is some of the best Pinkie stream-of-consciousness stuff I've ever read. It doesn't rely on fourth wall breaks, 'lol randomness', or anything like that. I feel like this is the first time I've read Pinkie and thought "Yeah, that seems like a believable, real character. Like, I could meet that person in my everyday life." It's, a breath of fresh air. Don't get me wrong, 'force of nature, might as well be a chaos aspect' Pinkie is fine, done well, but it seems to be the direction everyone takes. So, thank you for showing me a different Pinkie. And, if you could show me more of this Pinkie, I'd be happy. But, knowing that it's possible, that it's out there, that this Pinkie exists, is enough of a gift for me.

I had to stop reading halfway through because you write Pinkie too childishly. It just doesn't sit well with me.

I really like these Sunset/Pinkie stories and hope to see more of them. They have a good chemistry.

Lucky for me, Sunset suggests a movie. There’s a new adventure-y movie about a board game that turns into a video game that she’s kinda wanted to see, but doesn’t know if anyone else wants to see it. She says it’s supposed to be funny, too, and that it has a doctor’s mother-in-law in it.

i saw it and it was AMAZING!

anyway this was great!

First person, present tense?

Why would you do something like that? :fluttershysad:

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Experimentation, mostly.

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Ah, that takes me back...

Sunset doesn’t think about me like that. Besides, she like boys ‘cause she dated Flash that one time when she was evil and—

Likes.

I live to close to the mall, I decide when my house comes into view.

Too.

Adorable bit of fluff. Interesting way to write Pinkie. Shows that there's a lot going on in that head of hers. Keep it up.

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Fixed. Thanks for pointing those out.

Lol a doctors mother-in-law! :rainbowlaugh:

Adorable, pancreaticly perilous Sunpie. Not my favored Sunset ship, but still cute from start to finish.

I pout a little, ‘cause I wanted to go to the mall with everyone at once. Still, it could be worse I guess. We’re still going, after all.

I wouldn't jinx it if i were you pinkie.

We talk a little bit about school and stuff while we wait for Rarity. Well, Sunset talks. I just listen. My mouth goes all dry when I try to talk to her, like that time Dash dared me to eat a cotton ball.

Bad idea and something not to do.

Lucky for me, Sunset suggests a movie. There’s a new adventure-y movie about a board game that turns into a video game that she’s kinda wanted to see, but doesn’t know if anyone else wants to see it. She says it’s supposed to be funny, too, and that it has a doctor’s mother-in-law in it.

Idk what movie they're describing but to me sounds like maybe the first jumanji film, I think.

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