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MarcellusMiro66


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not bad
it is rushed but not bad at all
im curious to where this goes so keep up the great work!

very interesting start. now I'm curious whats going to happen next :rainbowderp:

Comment posted by Maroon567 deleted Jan 14th, 2018

That what in my mind right now:trixieshiftright:

that was... AMAZING like this level of amazing

can't wait to see what will come to it.

The assembly went smoothly as Princess Celestia practically roared (and even cursed ) her way into the initially hostile and cocky students, effectively tearing them a new one in the process.

Did you mean Principal?

Are the students who submitted secrets to Anon-A-Miss gonna be punished. Sure the crusaders are the ones who posted them but that info didn't just appear out of thin air. Also Twilight is gonna rip the entire school(but especially the human five and the crusaders)a hole the size of the grand canyon when she finds out Sunset's dead and they basically drove her to kill herself:twilightangry2:

Is it wrong I'm glad the school knows it isn't Sunset?

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Thanks for noticing that. I corrected that mistake just now.

"Forgive me, students. I know that the last few weeks have been...unkind to you. You clamored for actions to be taken, and yet my staff and I did nothing. I would like to apologize to you for not properly handling this situation beforehand. However...I have received news that will bring light to this state of affairs. All of those who have wished for the accused to be punished accordingly...may rest well tonight as you have finally received your wish. Sunset Shimmer...has died."

To sum it up: Well, CHS. WELCOME TO TARTARUS! And there is no escape.:pinkiecrazy:

How confusing will this story be? I won't read a confusing story.

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It won't be that confusing, but the storyline may (or may not) be nonlinear, similar to Quentin Tarantino and Christopher Nolan.

So Apple Bloom and the others will be revealed, and take they found Susnet body, sure they be investaging seeing how Sunset body was moved.

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Pretty tick at Celestia as well, sicne she was so gubg ho on punishing Sunset even if Sunset had been forced to confess as a lie.
It shows she just gave up, which she revealed to Apple Bloom, hope all three are punished harshly and hope Twilight tears the Rainbooms a new one.

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Oh, Twilight will. And maybe even more if she's really pissed...

"You think I didn't want to?! Do you think Apple Bloom using my crush on Button Mash as bait to keep my head in the game was easy for me?!" Sweetie Belle never gave Scootaloo the chance to reply, as she swiftly turned around and crossed her arms in contempt, "Some friends you girls are..."

So Apple Bloom (and most likely possibly Scootaloo as well) pulled a Diamond Tiara and pretty much blackmailed their own friend into continuing the plan when she grew a guilty conscious and wanted to stop.

Can’t wait to see everyone’s reactions to THAT little fact. Especially since now thanks to their selfishness, Sunset is dead and Sweetie Belle is going to haunted by it for the rest of her life.

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And yes, I know Sweetie Belle is guilty and has to face the consequences as well. It’s just the fact that she was blackmailed by her so called friends to keep up the plan, learning about how much bullying can hurt people, and having her fears come true...Well, I pity her a lot more then I pity Apple Bloom right now.

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This was my intention; Apple Bloom is what you would call the "Villain Protagonist" of the story.

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Sweetie Belle is the "Hero Antagonist", while Scootaloo is something of a neutral party. But all three feel guilt over their direct (or indirect, depending on how you see it) involvement in Sunset's death.

Hope the cocky students and the trio face retribution for this

Well that just went way beyond my expectation. Underage rape? Seriously?

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Again, don't say I didn't warn you. That being said, I don't condone actions of any kind.

For now, I'm Shandra Jimenez, a real reporter, reporting from Canterlot City News Headquarters."

I find it funny that she's clarifying that, For now, she's Shandra Jimenez and that yes, she's a real reporter. :derpytongue2:

What the hell is that summary even supposed to mean?

SUNSET!!!*rage builds up*Lizzie, get those bitches NOW!

*Lizzie the Crocodile chases down the CMC*

*takes out shotgun and machine gun*Those brats need to be punished.

*Ash Magma, Sunset's older sister, exits the portal*Where is my sister?

Why should you care?

*hand grows really hot as he grabs her by the throat*Where is my sister? What have you done with Sunset?!

I figured this story was dead, with how long it been glad to see a update.

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Not in a straight line, meandering, crooked, roundabout...:unsuresweetie:

It's like a Tactical Nuke about to go off, and applebloom is the trigger......

I mean when they find out that everything that sunset said that is about her being anon a miss and her reason she create it is a lie because the entire f*cking town want her to die so badly for something she didn't do or what people want her to told herself.

well just imagine the damage.....

Comment posted by DovahLord1233 deleted Dec 18th, 2019

"Bless me, Father, for I have sinned. I have...killed someone. I framed her for something unforgivable when she was innocent. Like me, she was suffering as she never found her true family and who they are. In the end, it didn't even matter, as she killed herself as a result of the torment she suffered. Unlike me, she found peace within the afterlife. I didn't mean for her to take her own life. It was an accident, a really terrible accident that I can't take back. What do I do?"

Just to clarify, is AB Catholic?

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No, she isn't entirely, but she likes to pray whenever in stress.

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Dude, those weapons are for sissy’s. Here, have a RPG-7!

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(Licks lips at that)(gets stars in eyes upon seeing minigun)

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Attacking them is a bad idea.
Do the right idea and don't stoop down to their level.
THAT WOULD MAKE THEM SUFFER MORE

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(Considers for a moment and puts weapons away)(walks off)

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I'm aware I'm replying to a comment that is more than a year old, but thanks for clearing that up.

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