not bad
it is rushed but not bad at all
im curious to where this goes so keep up the great work!

very interesting start. now I'm curious whats going to happen next

That what in my mind right now

More soon plz, this was really good

that was... AMAZING like this level of amazing

can't wait to see what will come to it.

Continue pls

SUNSET!!!*rage builds up*Lizzie, get those bitches NOW!

*Lizzie the Crocodile chases down the CMC*

Well, that escalted quickly.