Dave crash lands in Equestria after his prototype teleporter blows a fuse. Now he must adjust to the pony way of life and find his way back home. However, a unicorn name Lyra distracts Dave from his mission.
I was unsure of what to rate this story since there is a nude scene in the story. However, there is no mention of anything clop related.
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Did the story receive its name from a song? I fall asleep to a song with the same name, lol.
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I didn't know that there was a song with the same title until now.
To answer your question about the rating, it would have to be teen because of the nudity. Doesn't matter if there is no clop scene, but because something is naked, it needs to be teen.
i think it needs to be a tad longer.... other than that, pretty good.
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Don't worry! I'm not done yet
948995
Dual self insert? Treading dangerous roads...
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I don't see why it would matter. However, I do plan on writing other stories that don't involve me.
Way to short for the wait! Nevertheless I do like the story
^
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Yea. I'm sorry about that. I am on vacation right now so I haven't been able to work on it as much as I wanted to. I just wanted to add at least something to the story before I leave my internet for another three days.
Yeah, you seem to be rushing everything, don't be afraid to draw it out. Otherwise, it seems okay to me
:/ eeeeeeenteresting