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MiraculousDragonMaster


Howdy, everyone! I have been liking a lot of stories on this site. So I decided to join the community. I hope you guys read and enjoy the stories that I will share here with you.

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This story is a sequel to The Alicorn Trials


Ever since Princess Celestia made the revelation that the other members of the Mane 6 can become alicorn princesses, life hasn't exactly been the same. Applejack took it the hardest, of course. How could somepony like her can become an alicorn? Her whole life and destiny has been on her farm, so everything she thought she knew about herself had become so mixed up.

Months later, AJ's dragon friend, Spike, received an urgent message from Ember to help her solve a threat that has been made against her. He asks Twilight and Applejack to accompany him there; inviting AJ because he had thought maybe that a trip can help ease her mind on the whole thing she has been facing.

However, both Spike and Applejack deal with problems of their own: they could slowly be getting an attraction to each other. Will Applejack's life make sense once more, and solve the threat? Or will more conflict rise up that will force her life-changing decision upon her?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 35 )

Okay, I'm actually curious to see where this goes. Maybe all six of the girls being alicorn princesses will work out. I'll just have to see.

Very curious on how this goes.

Grannies make the best and worst matchmakers. :rainbowlaugh:
Also, :yay: Flashlight! :twilightsmile:

Subtle Granny, really subtle. :ajsmug: And I love how descriptive you got when Spike went over how he each felt about the girls. Love the song choice here, it works well with the story and it's one of my favorites. :twilightsmile: Hope you get better, I haven't been feeling so good either along with other people I know, what is it with winter being the worst time to get sick? And yay, Flashlight will be next in Stories of True Love! All and all this was a very sweet chapter!

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Thanks! :twilightsmile:

And I know, right? :ajsmug: I love winter, but I'm not a big fan of the cold.

Hmmm... You have my attention

Love how you adapted the song from the movie the princess and the frog

Great song choice! It was perfect for this moment! And I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who liked the movie when I was younger! I really hate how it gets so much hate... But anyway, this was a good chapter and I can't wait to see what Spike gets her! :pinkiehappy: Also I hope they'll have a heart-to-heart talk about this big decision she has to make with Spike giving his reasons and AJ considering his words. Good luck with your other stories and I hear ya I wish I can move on to new story projects but I feel too guilty to start them because I need finish my other ones first. Have fun at camp!

Good call holding off until you've already finished what you got. I'm pretty sure a good chunk of my tracking list is made up of your stories. :rainbowlaugh:

Poor AJ still not sure on how to deal with this new change, hopefully Spike can make her truly happy again

The ship has gotten stronger. At the same time, Spike's decision to have AJ accompany them totally feels natural and believable.

As great as it was for Ember to ask for Spike's help, at the same time I feel you could've used the map to call on Spike, Twilight, and Applejack making it more easier for the three of them to go but then I guess we wouldn't have that cute exchange between our favorite dragon and country pony. While they were staring at each other I couldn't help but think of the others' reactions afterwards.

:rainbowhuh: Anypony noticed Spike and Applejack were staring at each other for a really long time there?
:pinkiegasp: Oh my gosh, Dashie, you're right!
:raritystarry: I never realized it before! But they would be so adorable together!
:yay: They would!
:rainbowdetermined2: Betcha five bits they'll be goo-goo eyed for each other when they get back!
:pinkiehappy::raritystarry::yay: Agreed!

I can't wait for what happens next!

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Cute, with everypony giving their thoughts there.

Also, at first the map did cross my mind, but I thought this might work as well, along with that little moment that Spike and AJ shared.

Oh boy, a civil war on the way & Spike still hasn't reveal his feelings for AJ, things are gonna get interesting from here on out.

I loved it! I was confused of what song you were using at first and it took me awhile to figure out it was from the Island Princess, this is why I tell my readers ahead of time of what song I'm using in the chapter so they have a chance to find it and hear it so they don't get confused in the middle of the story and that it's much more enjoyable to read. That's my only problem with the chapter, but everything else about it was so sweet! I love how Applejack and Spike are conflicted with their feelings and I really hope they realize how much how deep their feelings go! And thank you for updating this story even though I'm sorry to hear about your tablet troubles and hope that it gets fixed eventually. But I really needed this after the latest episode, since it feels the writers are trying to push for Spirarity even though the end of the episode was just further proof on how bad a couple they would be! :twilightangry2: Sorry, but it just bugs me that try as Spike might, Rarity just never gives him anything in return and that's not healthy in any relationship, no one should have to all the loving and all the work themselves. I wish they would finally address that and have Rarity come clean on where Spike stands in her life. Or at least have Spike realize that there are better options when it comes to finding that special someone. Again sorry for the rant, I just wanted to get that off my chest, all the more reason why I love how you write for AppleSpike because you get the potential on how they can truly be a couple and possibly true loves. As for the next couple in Stories of True Love I want SoarinDash but I have a feeling that CheesePie is going to win, which is okay with me but my top vote is SoarinDash mainly because I really want to see what their Romeo and Juliet scenario will be like. Once again, great job and I wish you the best luck!

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Thanks! And no need to worry. I never was one for Spirarity either, even in the beginning when I first started watching My Little Pony. Maybe soon, the writers might come clean. All we can do is hope.

Man, I've been waiting for this. Thanks for updating. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by DavisSentoV5 deleted May 31st, 2018

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Hmm, I don't know if the writers were pushing for it. That ending is the most annoyed I've seen Spike regarding Rarity. :applejackunsure:

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I think that was what we were trying to say. We’re just hardcore AppleSpike shippers.

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Even if AppleSpike doesn't become cannon I just want Spike to move on from Rarity because it's a bad lesson to kids thinking they can get their crush when that rarely happens and from Spirarity's dynamic I can tell it's a path to an unhealthy relationship and if kids follow their example then they'll end up becoming depress from the lack of love and respect their spouse gives them in the future.

It's definitely worth it spike needs to move on from rarity (no offense to sparity shippers) because having a crush would eventually fade away.

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Not for a long time. I'm trying to finish some other stories on some other sites, and I need to get my inspiration back for this story.

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Ok can’t wait till you get inspiration on this story again ❤️

when will the next chapter come?

"Happy birthday, Applejack!" Pinkie Pie zoomed up to her and gave her a wide grin. "Were you surprised? I bet you were so surprised!"

Happy birthday Applejack

All : You gotta dig a little deeper.

Deja Vu

When I was younger my mom only let me watch Disney movies so it's giving me a major Case of deja vu

Applejack looked down at the floor, deep in thought. Spike did have a point. A trip could help ease her mind, and maybe it could help her come to her decision. Also, he was right. Honesty is her Element, and she can easily tell if somepony's telling the truth.

It's true Applejack is a living lie detector
Just like I'm a living spirit detector heck I can hear them too I even speak to them as well but the one thing I can't do with
Them is see them but I can still sense them

Why is this story on hiatus I would've to know what apple jack and the others choose please finish this amazing story

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