We all know what happened when newly crowned Princess Twilight Sparkle went through the enchanted mirror that led her to a world parallel to Equestria to retrieve her crown stolen by Sunset Shimmer. But, what if she hadn't gone through alone?
What if instead of Spike, her friends defied Celestia's warning and followed her into the other world? Would things really be that disastrous, or can this group of friends bring back together a different group of friends, who remind them of ponies, or creatures, back home in Equestria, or seem somewhat familiar? And will they also help the Mane 6 stop Sunset Shimmer from accomplishing whatever plan she's scheming?
Hints of shipping included.
Ships involved: Flashlight, SoarinDash, AppleSpike, Fluttercord, Cheesepie, and Raripants.
It's OK but the chapters are too short.
I really love how you're exploring this 'what if' scenario because I've been curious myself of what would happen if the girls had followed Twilight into the other world. I'll be tracking this to see how it goes.
Ah...not a bad idea. I'll give ya an upvote.
Though...these first 3 chapters could all be one chapter.
You're on another publishing spree. Then again, the first two and a half chapters weren't anything that we didn't already know. Hmm, I'm curious about how this is going to go. Wait, is SciTwi going to make an appearance in this AU? I get the feeling that she is for some reason.
honestly, you give away this bit of plot in the description, you should not have stretched it out three chapters.
And frankly, I think it'd be more interesting for them to have to deal with their alternates than things just happening to focus on a different group of friends
Having the " what if " effect made me curieus too. It would be gun too see two of Each one in the story making it a confucing, it is also very Editing to see that you will have discord in the story.
Wait, so instead of themselves the girls are going to run into, their love interests. Oooooh, this gonna get goooooood.
Not bad, though I wonder how you're gonna set this story up.
Ooooo interesting. I love where this is heading
I like it. Please continue so I can have something to read again
Maybe a little more variation from the atcual movie. Maybe you should use new quotes or something.
Everything else is great and I can't wait for you to update more. It's nice to have something to read while I'm waiting for Twilight's Dollhouse to finish.
So far, not a bad start. These first two chapters are basically just a writing-up of the beginning of the original Equestria Girls movie, but I'm still interested to see what happens next.
It's a good premise, Princess Twilight's friends going with her to the human world...
Aw. Spike's not going with them? Oh well.
But still, I'm interested to see where this story goes - especially as to what happens when the two different versions of the girls meet up. XD
Well, not bad so far. Someone else said that they'd like to see a bit more variation from the movie, but we only just got inside the school. I'll be really interested to see what happens when, say, the pony Fluttershy meets the human Pinkie, or human Rainbow Dash meets the Equestrian Applejack. Gotta love a good case of mistaken identity, right?
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Well, not quite. I actually have something else in mind.
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Well, all right then. I'll be interested to find out just what it is...
Can't wait 'till next chapter!!!
Discord? Interesting twist here! I liked the song you used for the girls, that was a nice idea.
Human Discord is something surprising. Usually EG stories have him as the school janitor, if he's at CHS. Having him as a student is rather surreal - but I can actually get behind it. The Equestrian Discord would probably approve because it's so surprising
Uh, so Discord's less annoying in this world am I right? So far, not bad and I can't wait until they met the rest of the boys, especially Spike, and I love the explanation as to why their doubles are not around.
Perfection
The boys are going to find out who the girls really are, aren't they? Oooh, are the Mane 6 going to teach the boys friendship, and the boys are going to teach their human alternates?
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Yeah.
They're meeting Cheese next, aren't they?
Hmm, is Flash going to have a bigger role in this fic? 
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He actually is.
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All my yeses! 😆
I smell ship, a whole lot of ship.
Eek! Cheese and Spike are next! I can't wait to see them and how the girls will react to them!
And I can't wait to see what more changes you'll make!
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Thanks!
Awesome
God Damn I’m lovin this!
Will the head of the planning committee be Surprise?
Well, this is getting complicated.
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no kidding
Ahhhh! I need more! I know Spike was most likely helping Big Mac because they're friends of course but it would so hilarious if Spike and AJ's human counterpart were dating and the girls find out and freak out! I almost forgot in the My Little Pony timeline that Pinkie meets Cheese after Equestria Girls! Now I'm curious if you'll make some kind of epilogue of Pinkie meeting Cheese later after this adventure. I can't wait for Fancy and Soarin's meet ups with the girls!
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I'm going to be posting this story on Wattpad but with the males like Discord and Cheese Sandwich replaced with the females like Vapor Trail and Sugar Belle. But first, I need you to make this idea have your seal of approval. So what do you say?
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I need some more details about this before I can come to a decision.
Awesome!
So, how are the girls going to figure a way out of this? I mean, I know they have Pinkie Pie and that her wild card nature has been helping her adapt to this world faster than the other girls, but will that be enough?
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Good chapter but it does raise the question of what Sunset meant by having the girls being taken from Twilight with Spike it was easy with five teenage girls not so much. So either that's poor thinking on Sunset's part or there's a plot twist coming. Either way I look forward to the next chapter whenever that may be,
What refer--(pause). 💡
i can't wait for the human versions to show up.
Awesome!
Ooh the plot is thickening! And I love how Flash was included in this chapter!
I can't wait for the boys to interact with the girls next! Update when you can.
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What reference was it?
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The umbrella scene from Miraculous Ladybug
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You are correct!