It's Tempest's first Hearthswarming in Ponyville, so she agrees to attend Twilight's Hearthswarming celebration. She even ends up with getting both presents and a surprise letter from her past.
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1) Tempest's mother would call her Berrytwist
2) Pacing, this comes off as rushed
3) the seems to be no build up for the next chapter
Not bad but A bit short and fast paced