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Darth Severus


Brony, Star Wars nut, Former Marine, BA in English, minor in creative writing, OCD and on the Autistic Spectrum

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Many years after her dethronement, Chrysalis has returned to her kingdom, but not in the way her people had secretly feared. Chrysalis appears to have changed the same way the others have, although some believe she is using her shapeshifting powers to do so, something that is believed impossible. While Thorax is willing to give her a chance to prove she's changed, Pharynx is not convinced of her reform. The King of Changelings calls his closest friend Spike in order to aid him, but will that be enough? And has Chrysalis truly reformed?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 22 )

Seems like a good start, left me wanting more meat, so to speak :)

She brings us love...quick break her legs so she can’t get away!!!

Oh I can't wait to see how she became so beautiful. Love the picture. Liked and fav

I am so loving this. ^_^

Never thought of Pharynx as one to break walls.

Reminds me of Spike having the strangest nightmare of all.

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Sorry, I've been having a block on this story, I'll try my hardest to get a new chapter up

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God damn it next month is ramadhan please don't be long

Enjoying this so far.

Chrysalis seems a little wooden. Her sorrow needs a tiny bit more body-language rather than just things she says.


My personal story-telling preference would be for a slow development of the romance angle.

My personal moral preference would be for true commitment before sex.

FWIW

Comment posted by Matrix11335 deleted May 16th, 2021

I don't know how you are going to continue this story since almost all of your stories are incomplete.πŸ™

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Yes, I'm aware, I have OCD, so when an idea gets in my head, I feel compelled to make a story, even if I can't finish it

Thanks for the next chapter πŸ™‚

Pharynx was spying on Chrysalis as she watered the flower gardens. He had to admit, her body was gorgeous, but he still didn't trust her. "What hind of dark magic is at work here?"

Just noticed that you put hind instead of kind.

Will we ever see the next chapter??? 🀨🧐
Please...??? πŸ₯Ί

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