What's It Like

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Queen Chrysalis was scared. What was it like to become good? Would the other changing take her back? She knew of somepony who might be able to help her.

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Nova Whirl

Nova Whirl #1 · Sep 21st, 2017 · · ·

She punched and then bite Thorax because he said ''hear'' instead of ''here'' :D

WannaFlugelHorn

WannaFlugelHorn #2 · Sep 21st, 2017 · · ·

LOL

thx for correction!

PonyDragon

PonyDragon #3 · Sep 22nd, 2017 · 1 · ·

You forgot a few lines at the end:

And then Thorax remembered the friendship-lessons from the Mane Six: He used Applejack's applebuck-lessons to snap his restraints, Rainbow's speed-lessons to reach Chrysalis within seconds, Twilight's magic-lessons to catch her with his magic before she hits the ground. Afterwards he used Fluttershy's calmness-lessons to calm her down and get her to talk about everything (while also sing her listening-lessons).
After returning to the hive he used Pinkie's party-lessons to throw a party (somehow Pinkie had forseen this and already baked a cake). Thanks to Rarity's generosity-lessons they accepted Chysalis back into the hive, but she got demoted to to normal drone.
In her freetime Chrysalis wrote a book about everything which became a bestseller.
Twilight liked it, until she got to the part where Chrsalis described how easy it was to inflitrate Twilight's palace and overpower the Mane Six (especially Twilight).
The End.

...I know, this is probably more cheesy than pre-transformation Changeling's legs.

WannaFlugelHorn

WannaFlugelHorn #4 · Sep 22nd, 2017 · · ·

Yup, that seems about right.

(And those things have legs of swiss or something!)

PonyDragon

PonyDragon #5 · Sep 22nd, 2017 · · ·

8442685
Indeed. Hehehe!

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