The Applewood Derpy

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Derpy simply loves her nephew, Crackle Pop, and is beyond excited when he asks for her help in the Applewood Derby. She wants to help in any way she can, and is willing to measure, cut, saw, drill, paint, or simply provide advice, as long as their spending time together.

A 1,111 one shot. I hope you enjoy! Comments are always appreciated, and I'll try my best to respond to each of them.

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WannaFlugelHorn

WannaFlugelHorn #2 · Mar 9th, 2018 · · ·

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Thank You!

Fluttercheer

Fluttercheer #3 · Mar 10th, 2018 · · ·

Welcome to the club of authors who wrote for Crackle Pop!^^ Number of members: 2, you and me. I can't believe that there aren't more who write for Crackle Pop.....

This was a nice, little story. Short, but nice.^^ Although, it would benefit from being a lot longer, it ends right when it starts getting interesting and the building process of the cart is being skipped over.
And you should read over a new story two or three times before publishing it, there are a lot of rushed errors a thorough proofreading could fix.
But one thing that turned out really well was how you described that blueberry muffin. I was actually able to taste it on my tongue while reading, great job!^^

WannaFlugelHorn

WannaFlugelHorn #4 · Mar 10th, 2018 · · ·

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Thank you so much! I've followed you, so we can chat more on your homepage. Perhaps I will add some for. Applejack is impressed by your honesty.